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Mastering Subtext in Fiction, Part 1: Saying It Without Saying It
Subtext is the hidden layer of meaning beneath the words and actions of a story. It’s what characters don’t say, what emotions they suppress, and what truths are left for the reader to infer, rather than being explicitly stated.
Great writing isn’t only about what’s written; it’s also about what’s implied. Readers love engaging with stories where they have to read between the lines, piecing together the unspoken truths of a character or situation.
Why Subtext Matters
Writing without subtext can make a story feel flat, too on-the-nose, or lacking in depth. Consider these two examples:
With Subtext
“Danny asked me out,” Lila said with a small squeal.
Sarah stilled, then forced a smile, her fingers tightening around the edge of the table. “I’m happy for you.”
Without Subtext
“Danny asked me out,” Lila said with a small squeal.
Sarah frowned and said, “I’m jealous of you.”
Do you see the difference? The first version leaves room for interpretation. Sarah is clearly not happy; but instead of telling the reader, her body language and dialogue contrast to suggest hidden emotions.
Where Subtext Appears in Fiction
Subtext exists in every part of storytelling. Let’s break it down.
Subtext in Dialogue
People rarely say exactly what they mean. In fiction, the best dialogue is often filled with:
- Deflections & half-truths: “Of course, I trust you.”
- Omissions & silences: A character hesitating before answering. I used this one above when Sara stilled.
- Irony & double meanings: Saying, “Nice job,” when they really mean the opposite.
Subtext in Actions and Body Language
A character’s movements often say more than their words. Compare:
- Explicit: “I’m really nervous.”
- With subtext: She rubbed her palms against her jeans and hauled in a ragged breath.
Readers pick up on nonverbal cues, adding layers to the story without the author having to spell everything out.
Subtext in Setting and Symbolism
The environment and objects in a scene can convey unspoken emotions:
- A pristine, too-perfect room → A character trying to maintain control.
- A wedding ring left on a nightstand → Relationship trouble without explicitly saying it.
Examples from classic literature and one from me
The Great Gatsby
Surface level: Gatsby throws extravagant parties filled with music, dancing, and high-society guests. People assume he loves wealth and entertaining.
Subtext: Gatsby doesn’t care about the parties themselves—he hopes that Daisy will one day walk through his door. The grandeur isn’t about fun; it’s a desperate, quiet plea for a second chance at love.
Pride and Prejudice
Surface level: Mr. Darcy is formal, reserved, and sometimes even rude, especially toward Elizabeth. He appears cold and disinterested.
Subtext: His stiffness is a defense mechanism. He’s struggling against his feelings for Elizabeth, battling pride, social-class expectations, and personal fears.
Code of Valor
Surface level: Brady St. John tells Emily Chastain, “You don’t have to be afraid.”
Subtext: Emily doesn’t respond. Instead, she presses her hands against the scars on her wrist and looks away. She wants to believe him, but her past trauma won’t let her.
Note: Silence is a powerful subtext. A character avoiding an answer, changing the subject, or physically reacting (rather than responding in words) speaks volumes.
Quick Writing Exercise
Take this line of dialogue and rewrite it with subtext: “I’m fine.”
Consider:
- What body language suggests they’re not fine?
- How can they avoid answering directly?
- What setting details reinforce the unspoken emotion?
Drop your before- and after-versions in the comments, and let’s explore saying it without saying it.
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Congratulations on Your Rejection!
You say you got a rejection from an editor, agent, or some other unenlightened knuckle-dragger? Congratulations! No, seriously. I mean it. Congratulations. Because, though rejection feels crummy, being rejected means something. Something good. “What?” you might ask. Let me list the ways. Rejection means you wrote something. Good for you! Rejection means you demonstrated faith in yourself and your writing. Yowza! Rejection means you put something out there, rather than hiding it under a bushel. Well done, you! Rejection means you’re behaving like an actual writer. What a marvel you are! Rejection means you conquered—at least for a moment—the fear …