by Steve Laube
On June 26, 1956, C.S. Lewis replied to letter from an American girl named Joan with advice on writing:
- Always try to use the language so as to make quite clear what you mean and make sure your sentence couldn’t mean anything else.
- Always prefer the plain direct word to the long, vague one. Don’t implement promises, but keep them.
- Never use abstract nouns when concrete ones will do. If you mean “More people died” don’t say “Mortality rose.”
- In writing. Don’t use adjectives which merely tell us how you want us to feel about the things you are describing. I mean, instead of telling us the thing is “terrible,” describe it so that we’ll be terrified. Don’t say it was “delightful”; make us say “delightful” when we’ve read the description. You see, all those words (horrifying, wonderful, hideous, exquisite) are only like saying to your readers “Please, will you do my job for me.”
- Don’t use words too big for the subject. Don’t say “infinitely” when you mean “very”; otherwise you’ll have no word left when you want to talk about something really infinite
Source: C.S. Lewis, Letters to Children, p. 64
Every writer should heed this advice.
This past weekend I was privileged to be a part of the C.S. Lewis Foundation retreat and writer’s workshop outside Houston at Camp Allen. Every conference has a different flavor but this one is so marinated in the richness of C.S. Lewis that it is like no other. Intellectually stimulating and spiritually challenging…I have been blessed. If you have the opportunity, considering attending the event next year. It is more than learning about craft it is also immersing oneself in art, creativity, music and dance.In the meantime, enjoy reading C.S. Lewis’ essay Three Ways of Writing for Children.
