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Every unforgettable story begins with one catalytic moment—an interruption so sharp and unexpected that the protagonist cannot continue life as usual. This moment is known as the inciting incident, the event that not only disrupts the ordinary world but launches the main story arc. In other words, without the inciting incident, the story doesn’t exist. So, keeping that in mind, let’s take a deep dive into what this moment truly is, why it matters, and how it works.

Definition

Short Definition: “The event that disrupts the protagonist’s ordinary world and sets the main story in motion.”

Longer Definition: The inciting incident is an unexpected, external event that upsets a character’s status quo, forces them out of their normal life, and propels them onto a path filled with conflict, stakes, and irreversible change. It introduces the problem they will spend the rest of the story trying to resolve.

Think of the inciting incident as:

• The narrative earthquake
• The point of no return
• The catalyst for change
• The moment that creates the central story question

Writing Rules

There are some rules that come with creating the inciting incident. Let’s talk about a few of those.

1. The inciting incident must be an event.

It must be a thing that happens, not a thought, feeling, or memory. This matters because events create measurable change. They alter circumstances in a way that forces action. In other words, an event requires a response. When the inciting incident occurs, a character must do something. As a result, events provide clarity. Readers know exactly when the story “begins.”

Examples:

General Market Fiction

• The Hunger Games: Prim’s name is called.
  *Event: The Reaping
  *Disruption: Katniss jumps in and volunteers, leaving her ordinary world forever.
• Harry Potter: Hagrid arrives with Harry’s letter.
  *Event: Invitation to the wizarding world
  *Disruption: Everything Harry believed about himself changes.

Christian Fiction

• The Atonement Child (Francine Rivers): Dynah is raped.
  *Event: Life-shattering trauma
  *Disruption: Dynah’s entire future changes and her faith and relationships are shaken.
• Redeeming Love (Francine Rivers): Michael Hosea hears God tell him to marry Angel.
  *Event: Divine instruction
  *Disruption: He had other plans, but now his life’s trajectory is on a completely different path.

Do you see in these examples how the inciting incident happens on the page that forces forward momentum for the characters and the story?

2. The inciting incident must also disrupt the ordinary world.

Your protagonist’s ordinary world serves as the “before” snapshot—the baseline that makes the coming disruption meaningful. What counts as disruption?

Anything that

• challenges the character’s comfort zone
• breaks routine
• exposes a weakness
• interrupts a plan
• forces a choice they didn’t want to make.

Examples:

Suspense / Thriller

• Jaws: A body washes ashore.
  *The town’s calm beach culture is shattered.
  *The threat becomes undeniable.

Romantic Suspense:

• If I Run (Terri Blackstock): Casey finds her friend dead and becomes a suspect.
  *Her safe life evaporates; she must flee.

YA / Coming of Age:

• The In-Between (Jenny B. Jones): Katie gets into serious trouble and is placed in foster care.
  *Her world is uprooted—new home, new rules, new challenges.

Readers must clearly see the shift from ordinary, normal world stability to instability.

3. Next, the inciting incident must launch the main story.

The inciting incident is not random drama, nor is it a subplot. It introduces the central conflict the entire story will revolve around and be resolved by the end. Ask yourself: If I removed this moment, would the story still happen? If the answer is yes, then it’s not the inciting incident.

Next time, I’ll have two more rules to add to this list. But for now, check your WIP (work in progress) and see if you can pinpoint your inciting incident.

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