8 Ways to Write Like Shakespeare (Part 2)

I started a post last week about how much I owe as a writer to Shakespeare. We never met, of course (I’m old, just not that old); but in addition to the four lessons I listed last week, I also learned these crucial and valuable lessons from the Bard of Avon:

  1. Do something new.

Shakespeare started his career where others did—imitating Chaucer, Milton, Spencer, and others. He not only borrowed and stole from other writers (as everyone did back then), but also chose subjects to compete simultaneously with competitors’ plays. But what set him apart from everyone else were his powers of innovation. He invented new words, coined memorable phrases, and took old plots and gave them new twists.

In earlier versions of King Lear, for example, the tale ended happily. In Macbeth, he borrowed characters from different periods of history. In Othello, he made the noble African of the title a Christian instead of a Muslim, as would have been expected.

Whatever you’re writing, ask: What’s new about it? What’s fresh? Are you breaking new ground or at least putting a new twist on something?

  1. Roll with the punches.

Shakespeare was just getting started as a player and playwright when London’s theaters were closed in June 1592 due to an outbreak of the plague. Suddenly, there were no theaters in which to perform and no crowds to applaud. So what did he do? Did he return to Stratford-upon-Avon to see his family? Did he travel with his theater company through the English countryside? We don’t know, but we do know that he produced two long poems for patronage and publication during that period: Venus and Adonis and The Rape of Lucrece, which became his first published works and probably established his reputation as not only a “player” and playwright but also as a poet.

You have to make adjustments as a writer. If you hit a roadblock, strike out in a new direction. Try another market. A different genre. A fresh tactic. Even a crazy idea, once in a while.

  1. Rewrite.

Most would agree that Shakespeare’s most famous words are Hamlet’s “To be or not to be” soliloquy. But did you know that famous speech exists in at least three versions? Similarly, the modern text of King Lear is based on three versions, each of which contains lines not found in the others, suggesting that Shakespeare revised the play more than once. Shakespeare was apparently still rewriting and revising long after his plays debuted.

All good writing is rewritten. And great writing is rewritten many times—even for someone as gifted as Shakespeare. Sorry, but that’s the way it is. Never ever send “foul papers” (as Shakespeare and his contemporaries called their first drafts) to an editor or agent; keep at it until you produce “fair paper,” as they called the production draft.

  1. Write to change minds and lives.

The predecessors of Shylock in The Merchant of Venice were characters that inspired only contempt. But Shakespeare crafted a far more complicated, even sympathetic character, while depicting the ugliness of vengeance and beauty of mercy.

Othello is a compelling warning against jealousy. Measure for Measure satirizes the “bawdy courts” of Shakespeare’s time. The Taming of the Shrew, while it offends twenty-first century standards, actually challenged Elizabethan beliefs and practices relating to marriage.

So how will your reader be better off for reading what you wrote? Realistically? Specifically? How will your next piece of writing light a fire? Change a mind? Enrich a life?


10 Responses to 8 Ways to Write Like Shakespeare (Part 2)

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    Louise M. Gouge September 19, 2018 at 5:15 am #

    Very interesting, Bob. You may want to check the period when Milton wrote. It was about a century later than Shakespeare.

    • Bob Hostetler
      Bob Hostetler September 19, 2018 at 5:28 am #

      Ah, you think I meant JOHN Milton. I was referring to his ancestor, Thaddeus Milton, b. 1528 (Actually I have NO idea how Milton got in there).

      • Bob Hostetler
        Bob Hostetler September 19, 2018 at 5:29 am #

        Writing like Shakespeare allows you to bend time, so maybe that’s the point.

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    Andrew Budek-Schmeisser September 19, 2018 at 6:04 am #

    I hope that my writing will help people learn to appreciate and embrace the incongruities of life…through the night I was running a fever on the north side of 103, and at one AM a lost dog appeared on my doorstep, and needed to be taken in and comforted.

    There is so much scope for joy in this life, and against what seems to be the fall of night, one can finally see the stars.

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      Shirlee Abbott September 19, 2018 at 1:06 pm #

      Amazing, Andrew, how a needy pup’s radar zooms in on your doorstep. Good dog!

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        Andrew Budek-Schmeisser September 19, 2018 at 1:18 pm #

        Shirlee, I think this is God’s way of saying:

        “I don’t care how you feel. Sick or not, I care what you DO, for the least of these.”

        And that, dear friend, is a God after my own heart.

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    Sheri Dean Parmelee, Ph.D September 19, 2018 at 8:05 am #

    Bob, I always enjoy your blog postings, but found the eight point in today’s comments particularly salient. You talk about changing minds and lives- this was the goal of Kierkegaard in his use of indirect communication to lead the people of Denmark to saving faith.

    Fast forward about 150 years to David Shore’s creation of House, M.D. and you will find a man who wanted to indirectly communicate with his audience about important social issues, such as the role of religion in the public sphere, relationships between doctors and their patients, abortion, marriage, drug usage, and the like. That is the topic of my 400-page dissertation on House M.D. and Indirect Communication, so you have really struck a chord with this blog!

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    Samuel Solomon September 19, 2018 at 11:16 am #

    If Mr. Laube will review my recent submission, “Colosseum”, we’ll see about how I’m going to light a fire or change a life.

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    claire o'sullivan September 19, 2018 at 3:33 pm #

    Hi Bob,

    Great post and great responses, all. I wrote a post earlier and it went poof. Operator error.

    So, I will sum up. Strunk and White, add Spunk and Bite. You won’t be sorry. Torture your characters in the flaws of the real world. Make the reader cry & laugh, bring characters to a point where they question their faith, & make horrible decisions (or at least not wise).

    I’ve read too many unforgettable books that always have a HEA right away, and there’s no torture. I mean, struggle. Big struggle.

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    Tisha Martin September 20, 2018 at 4:20 pm #

    Bob, you made me cry when you said we’d have to rewrite. I thought our writing was perfect the first time. 😉 No, actually, that’s what I’d like my readers to do. Cry—and for good reason, because it’s that happy crying. Not mushy crying, just happy crying. To change a life is essentially to change the world because one life makes a difference that touches another life that touches another. And to do it with an emotionally driven story that compels the reader to really think about their own life and to choose to start or grow in their relationship with God—that’s what writing is all about.

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