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The Inciting Incident (Part Two)

By Lynette Easonon March 25, 2026
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We’re still talking about the inciting incident. Last month, I gave you three rules it must do for your story. As promised, here are the last two rules.

  1. The inciting incident must create a point of no return.

This event, this moment must be irreversible. This happens when:

  • a secret is revealed
  • a crime is committed or witnessed
  • a moral line is crossed
  • a promise is made
  • a divine calling is heard
  • someone dies
  • someone enters a new world or realm
  • and so on

Examples

Psychological / Emotional

  • The Masterpiece (Francine Rivers): Grace agrees to work for Roman.
    *This single decision intertwines their lives in life-changing ways.

Action / Suspense

  • If I Run: Casey runs.
    *There is no undoing that choice.

Fantasy

  • The Lion, the Witch and the Wardrobe: Lucy steps through the wardrobe.
    *You cannot unsee Narnia.

Faith Journey

  • Redeeming Love: Michael obeys God’s instruction to marry Angel.
    *From that moment, he cannot return to “normal.”

A true inciting incident changes the story landscape forever.

  1. And, finally, it must catalyze change.

The inciting incident pushes the protagonist toward transformation—internally and externally.

It should target:

  • their greatest fear
  • their deepest wound
  • their strongest desire
  • their weakest point

See how all of your character development from the first chapter will pay off here?

Examples

Character Wounds Revealed

  • Redeeming Love: Angel’s trauma colliding with Michael’s love exposes her core wound—self-worth.
    *The incident forces her into a growth arc she didn’t choose.

Faith Tested

  • The Shack: Mack’s grief and anger confront the mystery of God’s character.
    *His worldview is torn open.

Identity Questioned

  • The Shunning (Beverly Lewis): Katie discovers the hidden satin baby gown.
    *Her entire identity and place in the Amish community are upended.

Good inciting incidents don’t only change circumstances. They change people.

So, let’s put it all together. What makes a powerful inciting incident?

It’s one that:

  • Happens early—frankly, the earlier the better—and I know someone is thinking, can it happen off screen? Yes, yes it can.
  • Is an external, concrete event
  • Disrupts the protagonist’s world
  • Launches the main plot
  • Creates an irreversible shift
  • Catalyzes transformation
  • Establishes stakes
  • Foreshadows theme

When all these elements work together, the moment becomes the earthquake that cracks open your protagonist’s life and puts the plot in motion.

Think about your current project and tell me your inciting incident. Then ask yourself if you took that out, would the story still happen?

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The Inciting Incident Series (Part One)

By Lynette Easonon February 25, 2026
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Every unforgettable story begins with one catalytic moment—an interruption so sharp and unexpected that the protagonist cannot continue life as usual. This moment is known as the inciting incident, the event that not only disrupts the ordinary world but launches the main story arc. In other words, without the inciting incident, the story doesn’t exist. So, keeping that in mind, let’s take a deep …

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What I Am Looking For (Lynette Eason)

By Lynette Easonon January 22, 2026
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(Updated 1/22/2026) Ernest Hemingway once said, “There is no friend as loyal as a book,” and I’ve always known that to be true. I grew up reading mysteries and suspense—Nancy Drew, the Hardy Boys, Sweet Valley High, Alfred Hitchcock, Erle Stanley Gardner, Agatha Christie, C. S. Lewis, and others. Later, I discovered Christian fiction through writers like Dee Henderson, Terri Blackstock, Colleen …

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Crafting Dialogue That Heightens Suspense and Reveals Secrets (Part 3)

By Lynette Easonon December 10, 2025
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In my last two posts, I explored how dialogue can serve the story, reveal character, and create emotional resonance. But one of dialogue’s most powerful functions—especially in suspense and mystery—is what it doesn’t say. Sometimes, the words on the page are only the tip of the iceberg. Beneath them lies subtext, motive, and secrets waiting to surface. Today, let’s explore five ways to use …

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Crafting Dialogue That Resonates (Part 2)

By Lynette Easonon November 12, 2025
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In last month’s post, I talked about how every line of dialogue should serve a purpose: revealing character, advancing the plot, building tension, or deepening theme. I also explored voice, subtext, and how to balance dialogue with internal thought and action. Today, I’m taking it a step further. Let’s look at five additional ways to elevate your dialogue, so it not only sounds real but …

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Dialogue in Your Novel

By Lynette Easonon October 15, 2025
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Dialogue is one of the most powerful tools in a writer’s toolbox. A single exchange between characters can reveal more about their motives, personalities, and relationships than pages of exposition—and trust me, readers prefer dialogue to exposition. Done well, dialogue pulls readers into the story, making them feel like they’re actually part of the conversation. If it feels forced or stalls the …

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Beyond Book One: Weaving Plot Continuity Across Your Series (part 3)

By Lynette Easonon September 10, 2025
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If you’re writing a fiction series, you already know it’s more than just writing more words—it’s about weaving together multiple books with continuity, cohesion, and ALL. THE. DETAILS. Because readers notice these things. So, today, I thought we’d talk about how to manage plot threads, foreshadowing, timelines, secondary characters, and tools that will help you stay sane—and impress your readers. …

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Beyond Book One: The Art of the Fiction Series (part 2)

By Lynette Easonon August 13, 2025
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Have you ever walked from one room in your house to the next, then wondered what you were there for? Yeah. Me too. I do remember that I’d gone there for a specific reason—only to find my mind completely blank. Why did I come in here? I find that happens occasionally when I’m writing and all of a sudden I can’t remember what color eyes I’d given my recurring police chief …

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Beyond Book One: The Art of the Fiction Series (part 1)

By Lynette Easonon July 16, 2025
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Let’s talk series. I don’t know about you, but I love to read books in a series. I find myself investing in the characters, the town, and everything else and can’t wait for the next book to come out so I can return to that world. If you’re thinking of writing a series, there are some things to understand and consider before you get started. The first step is to choose the type of series you plan …

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Mastering Subtext in Fiction – Part 3

By Lynette Easonon June 18, 2025
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Words can lie. Actions rarely do—unless someone is a really good actor/actress. But taking that element out, there’s a reason for the saying, “Actions speak louder than words.” I talked a lot about subtext in the last two posts. So, let’s dig a little deeper into the topic one more time. For example, a fictional character may say, “I’m fine.” But the tremble in her hands is in direct …

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