Awhile ago I received a call that illustrates a common error a writer can make when making their pitch: the problem of not knowing the genre in which they are writing. The call went something like this:
Writer: I’m calling to see if your agency handles westerns.
Agent: That is a tough genre to sell in the current market, but a lot would depend on how well you can write it.
Writer: Some places I’ve called have been rather rude when I ask that question.
Agent: I’m sorry to hear that. But an agency can only earn its keep if they can sell a project and a western would be a long shot.
Writer: I’m frustrated because it takes place in the future and I think it is unique.
Agent: Wait. What? It takes place in the future? Not in the late 1800s?
Writer: That’s right. It takes place in a future time where someone recreates the Old West by buying up millions of square miles of land and bans technology and sets up a new “throwback” society.
Agent: That’s not a western, that is science fiction. That changes your entire pitch! Sounds a little like the old Yul Brynner movie Westworld.
Writer: ???
And so the conversation carried on from there. Whether or not this was a viable book idea isn’t the point of this anecdote. Instead, it shows how an author can be summarily rejected because they start their pitch in the wrong place/genre.
At one writers conference a similar thing happened. The writer sat down for their pitch session and began with “I’m writing a fantasy.” Within a minute I knew they were on the wrong track. Their book was a thriller set in the U.S. in the near future with some sort of attack on American soil. The author thought because they were setting it in the future and making up the names of the President and other key people that it was a fantasy.
You might roll your eyes and say to yourself, “I’d never make that mistake.” But don’t be too hasty. It can happen to the best.
Why is this important?
I’ll use a metaphor of sorts to explain. Readers buy books that are inside specific boxes. Boxes labeled “romance” or “horror” or “thriller” or “self-help” or “theology” or “finance.” We readers reach into that box because we like that category or genre or want to gain something new from a book in that category or genre.
If your book is mislabeled, then the reader is confused. For example, pitching your book as YA when it really isn’t YA. Or a mystery when it is more of a suspense. Or a memoir when it is more of a self-help book. Or don’t pitch a book on cancer prevention as something to be shelved in the reference section. (Depending on the book, it probably belongs in the health section.)
But you shout, “Online stores don’t have shelves! Join the 21st century Steve!” Sorry to disappoint, but they do have “shelves.” Instead of physical shelves, the online stores have virtual shelves called BISAC categories. BISAC stands for “Book Industry Standard and Communication.” A publisher chooses which BISAC category to define the content of a particular book. (Those of you who independently publish know that Amazon will let you choose a select number of categories and a select number of keywords.)
A complete list of the categories can be found at this link: BISAC Categories. If you look at the list and click one of the major headings, you will see that each is divided into a group of subheadings. For example, the fiction category is further broken down into nearly 150 different types of fiction. The importance of these categories can be found in the online algorithms that say “If you bought that you might like this!” The computer looks at the metadata and makes its suggestion about similar books.
I jumped from simple examples to complicated metadata facts in the above paragraphs while trying to explain why getting the genre right in your pitch is important. I’ll go back to a practical answer. I might want a western, but I might be more interested in science fiction. I might not be interested in a memoir, but I might be interested in a book about dealing with cancer that is inspirational; they are not necessarily the same thing in the eye of the reader.
If you are unsure? Join a writers group and ask their opinion. Or better yet, go to your local bookseller and ask, “What section of the store would my book be shelved?” And know that they can only put the book in one spot in the store. Your novel cannot be positioned as a science-fiction romantic literary suspense thriller.
Meanwhile, I’m working on writing my own romantic theological finance thriller titled The New Beatitude: Blessed Are the Purposeful for They Shall Be Fined.
Andrew Budek-Schmeisser
Blessed are the purposeful,
for they shall all be fined,
’cause the do-gooders’ ego-pull
means that they will not mind
working to full ability
to cover others’ wants;
indeed, such is nobility,
a growing-place for vaunts!
And we can surely find the means
to increase their martyr-pains,
like taxing their investment dreams
on unrealized cap’tal gains
that we’ll ensure that we will not pay;
we’re in charge, we’ll find a way.
Rebecca Strange
Well said. After a few weeks working with an editor, I’m now beginning to wonder If what I consider a romance is something else. I think it may be too slow moving to fit the genre. Therefore, your insight is spot on today.
Jay Payleitner
One of my great frustrations is going into a bookstore such as Barnes & Noble to see if they are carrying my books. My personal bestseller, 52 Things Kids Need from a Dad, clearly belongs in the parenting section where it would be found by a mom or dad looking to be a better parent. Ridiculously, it’s shelved in Christian Living far from any other parenting titles. Worse, because of my last name, it’s right next to Joel Osteen’s books.
Of course, I’ve lost sales because of this. But the real heartbreak is that non-believers who do find my books (e.g. on airport book racks) discover all kids of encouraging parenting insight based on biblical principles while receiving a gentle and respectful delivery of the gospel. What a missed oppportunity!
I have stopped asking the staff if there’s any way to move my dozen books on parenting and marriage to more obvious locations. (It would be a win-win-win-win for me, the publisher, the store, and customers.) They say their hands are tied by corporate. I’ve had slightly better luck with mom and pop independent stores.
Sylvia M.
Several years ago, I read a book that was under a CBA romance line. The novel contained romance, but partway through the book, it became a suspense story. I wasn’t in the mood to read a suspense at all, choosing this novel because I wanted to read straight romance. Nothing on the cover labeled it as a suspense. Those are the kind of situations that are frustrating to me as a reader. Fast forward a few years. The author got the rights back to the novel, republished it as an Indie, and clearly labeled it as a suspense. I appreciated it. One thing I have noticed is a growing trend to historical suspense novels. I wish they would be categorized as well as the contemporary ones.
Katrin Babb
That is a common topic at my writers group: finding out what genre someone’s book should go under. Not going to lie, sometimes we end up completely stumped.
Allie Lynn
So I’m working on a novel that’s set in a fantasy world that has Victorian-era technology. Would this be considered gaslamp fantasy? I’ve been doing research and now it seems that gaslamp fantasy is just historical fiction with fantasy elements set in real world locations.
Julia Fenstermacher
Really helpful! There are expectations readers have of the genre they love. My critique group’s fantasy writers helped me filter out fantasy terms and character types so that I stayed “in my lane.” I don’t read fantasy so it was very helpful! I had no idea I was genre-hopping by putting a spooky creature in my supernatural story that I’d plucked from the fantasy realm!