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Don’t Let an Editor Ruin Your Book!

By Karen Ballon January 13, 2016
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I’ve worked in almost all the different aspects of publishing. Editor, writer, agent. Seen and done almost all there is. And it’s always fascinating when I hear writers talk about editors as though they’re these mean, rigid despots who just want to ruin their books. That is SO not who I, or the other editors I’ve known all these years, are like. We don’t want to ruin anything. We want to help. But when we try to do that, all too often the reaction is angry, frustrated writers who can’t believe we’re suggesting the changes we are.

So how do you keep an editor from “ruining” your book? Well, first and foremost, realize the editor is for you. As in on your side. As in looking to help.

Second, make sure you hire the right editor. If you’re writing fiction, has this editor worked with novelists before? In your genre? Do they have recommendations from clients (not friends) that they’ve worked with in the past? If you’re writing nonfiction, same questions! Has the editor worked on your genre of nonfiction before? Any recommendations from satisfied clients?

Third, make sure you are CLEAR about what you want from the editor.

C—Communication

* At what stage do you want to hear from the editor?

*How often during the evaluation or edit do you need an update?

*Make the schedule crystal clear. What is your drop-dead due date for finishing the edit? Do you want the manuscript to come to you as each chapter is edited, or when the whole thing is done? How much time do you need to review the editing?

L—Limits

Are there things you don’t want changed? Make that clear right up front. In fact, put together a style sheet to send with the manuscript outlining any elements that need to be as they are. Is there dialect that has to be the way you have it, or terminology specific to a character’s job? For example, to the world in general, widows and orphans are to be cared for. But to typesetters? Widows and orphans must be eliminated! Mwahahaa– Um…never mind.

E—Expectations

What if you think the only problem with your book is the character development, but the editor comes back and says your basic craft needs a lot of work? It’s helpful to tell the editor up front what you think the issues are, but that you’re open to what they think needs to be revised. But be sure you are open.

A—Analyze

Ask the editor to send you 5 edited pages before she jumps into the full edit. That way you can see her editing style. Does she show you want she’s suggesting by rewriting a line? Does she just make suggestions in comments? Does she use Track Changes? Let her know what you do and don’t like about the sample edit. This way you both can be sure that the edit will be done in a way that best suits you.

R—Remuneration

The best way to deal with the money side is to have a work-for-hire contract in which you outline not just the fee, but the following as well:

*Pay schedule. Are you paying 50% of the fee upfront, and 50% on completion? Or paying the whole thing upfront? A lot of this will be dependent on what the editor expects, but even then you need to get it in writing.

* Kill fee. How much will you pay if you receive the edit and don’t think it’s done as you both agreed it would be. I shouldn’t have to say this, but I will: be fair! Remember, it’s not just that the editor has spent time evaluating and working on your manuscript. She also didn’t accept other jobs so she could do your job. Just like writers, freelance editors often live month to month. Your editor may be counting on the fee for your project to cover the bills that month. You need to take all of the editor’s side of things into consideration.

* Financial Change. What happens if your finances change in the middle of the project? A job loss, a car breaking down, illness and/or unexpected medical expenses?

* Schedule change. What will you do about fee if you realize, halfway through, that you need more revision time? If you’ve agreed that half the fee will be paid on completion, then asking for more time will affect the editor’s bottom line. You need to have an agreement up front about whether or not the fee must be paid at a certain time, regardless of if you need more time.

So the key, then, is being sure you’re CLEAR with the editor right up front. That will make the process easier on both of you. And who knows? You might even find you enjoy the edit.

(Yeah…what can I say, I make things up for a living. <wink>)

 

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Category: Craft, Editing, Writing CraftTag: Editing, Writing Craft

Practice Makes…More Practice

By Dan Balowon December 15, 2015
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Before musicians perform, they practice, and then practice some more. The best musicians might practice eight hours a day, every day, for many years. Then maybe, just maybe they get paid to perform, which rarely makes up for the thousands of hours they practiced for free. Before an artist paints or sculpts or creates anything, they practice and practice some more and throw away many of the things …

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Category: Career, Craft, Writing CraftTag: Craft, Practice, Writing Craft

Five Things that Changed the Publishing World

By Steve Laubeon December 7, 2015
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Over the past twenty-five years ago there have been five things that changed the landscape of the publishing industry forever (the first three below happened in 1995). Amazon.com Dan Balow wrote an excellent piece on this earlier this year. It still is quite astounding when you think about it. In 20 years this little online startup (founded 1995) became the most dominant online retailer in the …

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Avoid Weak Words

By Steve Laubeon November 30, 2015
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Below is a great infographic detailing some weak words and how to fix them. Do you agree with this exercise or not? Do you have anything you can add to it? Years ago I had to strike the word “very” from an author’s manuscript because it had been used far too many times. In a very funny email the author replied with the word “very” typed over 500 times. The author said …

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First Line Fun

By Karen Ballon November 18, 2015
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We all know how important first lines are in our writing. Those lines set the stage for the readers, creating a sense of dread or anticipation, excitement or contemplation. First lines can capture and transport, or convict and challenge. When I start a book and the first line grabs me, I always get a bit of a charge. If the first line is that good, I have great hopes that the rest will be great. …

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We’re Stylin’ Now! – A Style Sheet Template

By Karen Ballon November 11, 2015
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As promised last week, here’s the template for the style sheet I use. Feel free to change, add, and adapt as you wish! Have fun. STYLE SHEET Title: Author: Updated: I find it’s a good idea to put the date I’ve updated the sheet to ensure I send the most recent one with my manuscript.  These first sections are for fiction and nonfiction Source Materials This is where I list my primary sources, such …

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Category: Craft, Editing, Writing CraftTag: Editing, Style Sheets, Writing Craft

Style Sheet: Don’t Let Your Manuscript Leave Home Without It

By Karen Ballon November 4, 2015
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Okay, everyone sing it with me… “We’ve got trouble, folks. “Right here in Laube City. “With a capital T and that rhymes with E and that stands for EDITOR!” Ah, the joys of being edited. How often have you received a manuscript back from an editor only to find that this person changed elements of your manuscript that never should have been changed? That she “corrected” terminology specific to an …

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Category: Craft, Editing, Writing CraftTag: Editing, Style Sheets, Writing Craft

Lessons from Halloween

By Karen Ballon October 28, 2015
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(First, one ground rule: This blog isn’t about, nor is it the forum for, either the debate on the origins of Halloween and whether or not Christians should celebrate it, or for the magic vs. no magic issue. Okay, on with the blog…) I used to love Halloween. Loved helping my mom decorate the house and make popcorn balls, the treat she always gave out to costumed munchkins at the door. Which …

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Where is the Romance?

By Tamela Hancock Murrayon October 22, 2015
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When I talk with authors about their stories, sometimes they’ll say. “Yes, there’s romance. But it doesn’t happen until chapter five.” That’s when I look at the story and try to give advice on how they can change that. Granted, not every novel is a genre romance, nor should it be. And introducing the love element earlier shouldn’t turn the story into a genre romance. A more likely scenario? The …

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Category: Craft, Romance, Writing CraftTag: Craft, Romance, Writing Craft

Harvest Haiku

By Karen Ballon October 21, 2015
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I just realized that we haven’t had a writing blog for some time, so what better time to correct that situation than autumn, when the air is pregnant with possibilities and the fragrance of change. I admit it, autumn is my absolute favorite time of year. I love the colors, the holidays, and the cooler weather. The way the birds are more active and the breeze more crisp. So come, you writers. Share …

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