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What Do You Want to Be When You Grow Up?

By Tamela Hancock Murrayon June 2, 2021
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Sometimes, interviewers ask when you first knew what you wanted to do in life. As a child, I remember aspiring to be a dancer because moving to music looked fun. But when I found this “magazine” I had made for my mother when I was ten, I realized my interests (aside from trying to get my mother to buy Cocoa Krispies cereal) tended toward my future reality.

In the photo, notice that the lucky old penny initially taped to the top of the page is missing. Never one to waste a penny, my mother surely took it.

On to the Ad

Do You Like Mysterys? (The misspelling is evidence that I needed a good editor.)

For each mystery ordered, send 10 cents plus one box top from Kelloggs Coco [sic] Krispies.

If you do order, you will get your mystery in November. (I wrote this in May, giving myself time to write the book. I recall figuring if she ordered two or more, I’d write faster. Writers, do you recognize yourselves here?)

Write your name and address on the back of the order form.

Check the mystery(s) you want:

__ The Mysterious Letter

__ The Strange Disappearing of Clarke David

__ Strange Footprints

__ The Letters of the Phantom

I provided my address.

As a note: (All of these stories are about Lilly ‘n’ Millie.)

I thought creating these stories would be entertaining and, hopefully, my mother would enjoy them. I was excited about the fictional Lilly and Millie.

Foreshadowing a Second Career

This ad illustrates some elements of an agent’s pitch letter.

Audience: My mother loved to read Nancy Drew mysteries. Likewise, I send proposals to editors whom I feel can offer serious consideration.

Price: Though I don’t set a contract offer goal in a pitch letter, I have figures in mind for that author when I write the letter. I can assure everyone that my price has increased, although anyone who wants to throw in a bonus box of Cocoa Krispies is welcome to do so.

Timeline: When can the author submit the manuscript?

Great titles: Make the customer eager to read the book!

Series potential: Discussing more than one book depicts a career author.

Contact information: Make sure the editor knows where to find you.

Excitement: Fans of Lilly ‘n’ Millie are sure to want to read these books!

Dreams

Do you remember when you first wanted to be a writer? What did you first write for publication? Why?

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Spoiler Alert!

By Tamela Hancock Murrayon May 12, 2021
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Sometimes authors submit proposals that don’t reveal the ending of a novel. I’m the first to admit that a teaser will encourage a reader to buy a book. Once the reader has to know how the story ends, they’re hooked! Yes, agents are readers. However, when evaluating a novel for representation, we are marketers. Agents must consider if editors will be interested in the book. In turn, editors must …

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Category: Book Proposals, Pitching

Testing the Truth

By Tamela Hancock Murrayon April 29, 2021
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Years ago, after a class on taxes at a writers conference, an attendee shook her head. “That teacher’s going to get a lot of people in trouble.” I couldn’t deny that some of the suggestions offered seemed risky. I disregarded most of what I’d heard as I made my way out the door. This experience is rare, but it does happen. Conference directors engage well-known, established instructors for …

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Category: Conferences, The Writing Life

Will the Editor Catch My Error?

By Tamela Hancock Murrayon April 21, 2021
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Awhile back, an author asked if the editor will catch and correct inaccuracies. The best answer is no. Or a maybe. Fact-checking isn’t necessarily an editor’s job. Editing is their job. No author has a right to expect an editor to know every detail about every topic to make a story or nonfiction book accurate. For example, did you know that today is (among other celebrations) Thank You for …

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Your Reader

By Tamela Hancock Murrayon April 8, 2021
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Not long ago, I met with a group of publishing professionals who broached the topic of audience. A couple of them discussed how their company envisions their reader. They went so far as to identify the reader by the name they had given her. They knew her age and discussed preferences that would dictate whether she would like a specific book. As a writer, perhaps you would be helped by working to …

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Category: Branding, Editing, Marketing, The Writing Life

Your Compelling Cover Letter

By Tamela Hancock Murrayon March 31, 2021
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In light of my recent posts discussing what we can and cannot overlook in submissions, I think authors may benefit from quick tips on how to add sparkle to an email cover letter. What is the subject line? When you look through hundreds of emails in your inbox, you gravitate to those that grab your attention, right? So do we! Consider these possible subject lines: Book Submission Query Romance …

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Category: Book Proposal Basics, Book Proposals, Pitching

What We Cannot Overlook

By Tamela Hancock Murrayon March 18, 2021
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Last week, I wrote about mistakes we can overlook when considering submissions. However, some mistakes we cannot ignore. Please avoid these: The wrong word count. Sending submissions with an inappropriate word count is the most common mistake we see in the slush pile. We have no current market for a 35,000-word novel or a ready market for books of 250,000 words. The only exception would be for the …

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Category: Book Proposals, Editing, Pitching

What We Can Overlook

By Tamela Hancock Murrayon March 10, 2021
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My office receives thousands of submissions a year. We’re thrilled to see proposals so well crafted that they’re ready to submit to publishers. Those submissions are few. Most contain mistakes. We don’t want you to feel stymied, as though agents are looking for reasons to reject proposals and will pounce on any infraction. Rather, let’s consider what my office may be able to overlook when the …

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Category: Book Proposals, Pitching

Am I on a Deadline?

By Tamela Hancock Murrayon February 25, 2021
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Many authors submit book proposals to agents and editors with the thought, If this doesn’t work, I’ll self-publish. That plan is reasonable. However, when strategizing your career, consider the timeline. As an agency, we set a time frame to respond to author queries. Often, we miss our stated deadline. In working with other publishing professionals, we are aware that this is an industry-wide …

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Category: Book Business, Rejection, Self-Publishing, The Writing Life

Judicious Sharing

By Tamela Hancock Murrayon February 4, 2021
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As a writer, you’ll face times of profound despair and, I hope, massive victory. When successful, you’ll want to share your news with your supporters. But I recommend muting your enthusiasm with your detractors. And we all have those. To my surprise, a person who never speaks to me or contacts me except to ask a favor linked me to a lengthy fluff piece touting sundry accomplishments. I sent …

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Category: Career, Marketing, The Writing Life, Theology
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