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The Back Cover Blurb

By Tamela Hancock Murrayon June 23, 2021
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Even in the age of online shopping, the back cover blurb is essential in helping a customer choose a book. When a reader decides between two books, the one with the best back cover copy often wins.

When referring to the back cover, the reader wants to know the following:

What does this book reveal?

Why should I care?

Nonfiction

Of course, nonfiction covers a wide swath, including instructional, biographical, devotional, and other books that find their natural audience by virtue of a readership interested in that topic.

Please note that for nonfiction, this post addresses the position of a large number of Christian authors writing felt-need books. Think how to improve your life.

These readers will care about the book because they seek a solution to a problem. These authors compete with every other author, living or dead, who’s written on that topic. The author has to show the reader why their book is better than someone else’s.

The goal is to reassure the reader that the author is a friendly authority who will solve a problem.

Structure

Here is one type of structure for your nonfiction back cover blurb:

Paragraph One: Define the problem, perhaps by posing questions the reader would like to answer.

Paragraph Two: State a couple of points about the author to establish authority on the topic. Note that the publisher should place an expanded author biography (or two) elsewhere. The author should state how the book will help the reader answer questions and work through the proposed solutions.

Fiction

The fiction reader isn’t interested in solving a problem as much as they are looking for entertainment. This reader seeks to live through characters tackling dilemmas that may reflect their lives. The reader wants to know the questions the book will answer through the story. Topics are critical. For example, a reader looking for a frothy romance won’t gravitate to a suspense novel dealing with addiction. The author should answer:

Period: Contemporary or historical? If historical, when?

Place: The Old West? Prairie? Manhattan?

Protagonists: There’s no comparison between reading about a private eye versus a preteen. Unless the book is about a preteen private eye. Tell us!

Goals: Is the protagonist solving a murder? Preparing for a balloon ride? Building a house?  

Obstacles: What is keeping the protagonist from achieving their goal? Show both internal and external conflict.

Examples of internal conflict: love, money, race, class, the past.

Examples of external conflict: family, friends, ghosts, alligators, Sasquatch.

Structure

Here is an excellent way to structure the back cover copy for a romance novel. You can adapt this form to other types of stories:

Paragraph One: Identify the heroine and her internal and external conflicts.

Paragraph Two: Identify the hero and his internal and external conflicts.

Paragraph Three: Show the problems with bringing the two of them together and why this is interesting

Whatever you do, have fun writing your back cover blurb!

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Category: Book Proposals, Pitching, The Writing Life

How Long Should My Summary Be for a Novel?

By Tamela Hancock Murrayon June 10, 2021
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Writers often ask about the length of a book summary for a proposal. How long should it be? I can say: The summary should be as long as you need it to be. Your goal is to present your story so an editor will want to read the book and then make an offer to publish it. If you can write a compelling summary, that’s a gift you should not be shy to use. Here are a few more tips: Present your proposal …

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Category: Book Proposals, Pitching

What Do You Want to Be When You Grow Up?

By Tamela Hancock Murrayon June 2, 2021
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Sometimes, interviewers ask when you first knew what you wanted to do in life. As a child, I remember aspiring to be a dancer because moving to music looked fun. But when I found this “magazine” I had made for my mother when I was ten, I realized my interests (aside from trying to get my mother to buy Cocoa Krispies cereal) tended toward my future reality. In the photo, notice that the lucky old …

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Category: Career, Personal, The Writing Life

Spoiler Alert!

By Tamela Hancock Murrayon May 12, 2021
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Sometimes authors submit proposals that don’t reveal the ending of a novel. I’m the first to admit that a teaser will encourage a reader to buy a book. Once the reader has to know how the story ends, they’re hooked! Yes, agents are readers. However, when evaluating a novel for representation, we are marketers. Agents must consider if editors will be interested in the book. In turn, editors must …

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Testing the Truth

By Tamela Hancock Murrayon April 29, 2021
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Years ago, after a class on taxes at a writers conference, an attendee shook her head. “That teacher’s going to get a lot of people in trouble.” I couldn’t deny that some of the suggestions offered seemed risky. I disregarded most of what I’d heard as I made my way out the door. This experience is rare, but it does happen. Conference directors engage well-known, established instructors for …

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Category: Conferences, The Writing Life

Will the Editor Catch My Error?

By Tamela Hancock Murrayon April 21, 2021
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Awhile back, an author asked if the editor will catch and correct inaccuracies. The best answer is no. Or a maybe. Fact-checking isn’t necessarily an editor’s job. Editing is their job. No author has a right to expect an editor to know every detail about every topic to make a story or nonfiction book accurate. For example, did you know that today is (among other celebrations) Thank You for …

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Your Reader

By Tamela Hancock Murrayon April 8, 2021
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Not long ago, I met with a group of publishing professionals who broached the topic of audience. A couple of them discussed how their company envisions their reader. They went so far as to identify the reader by the name they had given her. They knew her age and discussed preferences that would dictate whether she would like a specific book. As a writer, perhaps you would be helped by working to …

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Category: Branding, Editing, Marketing, The Writing Life

Your Compelling Cover Letter

By Tamela Hancock Murrayon March 31, 2021
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In light of my recent posts discussing what we can and cannot overlook in submissions, I think authors may benefit from quick tips on how to add sparkle to an email cover letter. What is the subject line? When you look through hundreds of emails in your inbox, you gravitate to those that grab your attention, right? So do we! Consider these possible subject lines: Book Submission Query Romance …

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Category: Book Proposal Basics, Book Proposals, Pitching

What We Cannot Overlook

By Tamela Hancock Murrayon March 18, 2021
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Last week, I wrote about mistakes we can overlook when considering submissions. However, some mistakes we cannot ignore. Please avoid these: The wrong word count. Sending submissions with an inappropriate word count is the most common mistake we see in the slush pile. We have no current market for a 35,000-word novel or a ready market for books of 250,000 words. The only exception would be for the …

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What We Can Overlook

By Tamela Hancock Murrayon March 10, 2021
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My office receives thousands of submissions a year. We’re thrilled to see proposals so well crafted that they’re ready to submit to publishers. Those submissions are few. Most contain mistakes. We don’t want you to feel stymied, as though agents are looking for reasons to reject proposals and will pounce on any infraction. Rather, let’s consider what my office may be able to overlook when the …

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Category: Book Proposals, Pitching
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