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Book Proposals

Author Says / Agent Hears

By Dan Balowon June 12, 2018
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Many aspiring authors communicate things they think are positive, or at least in the spirit of honesty and transparency, but end up being understood entirely different than the intended message.

In an attempt to show commitment, an aspiring author says, “I’ve been working on this book for ten years.”

An agent hears, “I am an extremely slow writer and once finished, enter a protracted spiral of self-editing which can take years. Don’t get your hopes up regarding deadlines.”

Hmm, doesn’t sound like a good prospect to represent, but I’ll still review what they have, only now with a skeptical eye.

Author says, “I already have the manuscript finished and the cover designed!”

Agent hears, “I know books can be published in two weeks once you have a manuscript and a cover finished.”

This is traditional publishing. It will take one to two years to get your book published, and the publisher decides if the book is finished and will design their own cover. Relax.

Author says, “I already hired an editor to edit my manuscript.”

Agent hears, “I’ll decide how the manuscript is edited, no one else.”

Again, this is traditional publishing. Publishers edit you. The manuscript is finished when they say so. Get ready to be in full collaboration mode.

Author says, “I don’t care about an advance or any royalties. I just want my book published.”

Agent hears, “I want you to work for me with no compensation.”

I often wonder if this author would ask a real estate agent to help them give away their home. Literary agents are paid when we sell something for money. Publishers make money by selling books for money, generating revenue and profit. There’s no need to forego advances or royalties. Writers should be paid…in money. If you want to give away all your earnings from writing, go ahead, but don’t expect everyone to do it.

Author says, “God told me to write this book.”

Agent hears, “I will be difficult to work with if you fail to sell my book or try to change anything.”

Honestly, I hate having to feel negative about this, but as the years pass, we all meet people who invoke the guidance of God when they simply want to eliminate discussion or disagreement. If I responded, “I don’t feel led by God to represent you,” an author might question whether I am truly discerning God’s leading. Let’s just assume believers are all on the same wavelength and leave it there. Then, write the book well and convince me why it is worthwhile, leaving out God’s endorsement.

Author says, “This book is for everyone.”

Agent hears, “I have no idea who this book is for.”

No book is for everyone. Not one. You might be able to make a case the Bible is for everyone, but even with the Bible, those who don’t believe in God and are not drawn by God have no idea what it means. And we don’t even address the language issue, which further limits readership. Most people in the world don’t read English.

Author says, “This book is for a crossover audience.”

Agent hears, “This book has objectionable stuff in it.”

Words matter. Those who write should be able to discern the meaning behind them, both obvious and not-so-obvious. When writing to a publisher or agent, spend as much care on the cover note and proposal, thinking about the reader, as you did writing the book.

Many a book has been torpedoed by a careless choice of words in the proposal or cover letter. I should know, I’ve done it myself.

 

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Category: Book Proposals, Get Published, Pitch, Pitching, The Writing LifeTag: Agents, book proposals, Get Published, pitch, Pitching

The Wild Pitch

By Steve Laubeon June 11, 2018
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In honor of the upcoming baseball season I thought it would be fun to explore the art of pitching.

A couple years ago I was watching a Major League baseball game and the pitcher unleashed a horrific throw that sailed about eight feet behind the batter. It floated to the backstop without a bounce and everyone in the stadium wonder what had just happened. It looked like the pitcher lost his grip …

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Category: Book Proposals, Get Published, Pitching, SteveTag: Get Published, Pitching, Proposals, Query Letters

Book Proposals: The Nonfiction Annotated Outline

By Steve Laubeon June 4, 2018
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Since we recently discussed the role of a synopsis in a fiction proposal I thought it important that we address what the nonfiction author needs to provide. This is one of the main differences between the fiction and the nonfiction book proposal. I’ve seen many authors confuse the two and create extra work for themselves. Not a Synopsis but an Outline I intentionally did not use the word …

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Category: Book Proposals, Get PublishedTag: Annotated Outline, book proposals, Get Published, Nonfiction

Four Ways a Proposal Gives You Focus

By Tamela Hancock Murrayon May 31, 2018
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Sometimes I receive queries from writers wondering where their focus should be. They are unsure where they fit in with publishing. Here is where writing a proposal can help: 1.) Who am I? Your author biography, written in third person, (as is your entire proposal) forces you to decide how to present yourself to the world. 2.) What am I writing? Look at your work. Where does it fit? If you are …

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Category: Book Proposals, Get PublishedTag: book proposals, Get Published

A Title Wave

By Bob Hostetleron May 23, 2018
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Some writers find it hard to title their work; others have as much (or more) fun creating titles as they do writing articles, stories, or books. So, just for fun, I asked some of my colleagues and clients: “What title of a nonexistent, imaginary, unwritten, or unpublished work do you love? Or would you love to read if it were available?” For example, some of my “dream” titles are: No Grit, No …

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Book Proposals: The Fiction Synopsis

By Steve Laubeon May 21, 2018
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Attention all novelists! Every fiction book proposal must include a synopsis. Everyone who teaches on the book proposal says you need one. But why? Those two to three single-spaced pages of agony will never be seen by anyone else but editors and agents, so why? Why, oh why, must a novelist create a synopsis? I understand how difficult it is to write a synopsis. And yet, you need to do the work. …

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Category: Book Proposals, Get PublishedTag: book proposals, synopsis

Book Proposals: Due Date

By Steve Laubeon May 14, 2018
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There is an important question that needs to be answered in your book proposal in the “Manuscript Status” section. When will your manuscript be ready? This information is important whether you are writing fiction or non-fiction. When Will Your Book be Done? Fiction: If you are a first time novelist, never before published, your answer should be “The manuscript is complete and …

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Real Reasons Some Books are Rejected

By Dan Balowon May 8, 2018
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Most authors and aspiring authors are open to direction and crave constructive comments to help them advance their craft and career. Hopefully, you have had a chance to be part of a good critique group which provided assistance in a manner you found energizing and helpful. When a book is rejected by a publisher or agent, sometimes the reasons behind the rejection are not what you might classify as …

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Category: Book Proposals, Get Published, RejectionTag: book proposals, Rejection, The Publishing Life

Book Proposals: Word Count

By Steve Laubeon May 7, 2018
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There is an important question that needs to be answered in your book proposal in the “Manuscript Status” section. What is the length of your book? This information is important whether you are writing fiction or non-fiction. How Long is Your Book? Think carefully before you declare a word count in your proposal. I don’t know how often I’ve seen someone propose a 280,000 …

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Your Author Photo

By Steve Laubeon April 30, 2018
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A number of questions were raised when I wrote about the “bio” portion of a book proposal and suggested that you include an author photo. Here are some practical considerations. Make it Look Professional Quality photographers will tell you that background, lighting, how you look at the camera, and what you are wearing have a great influence on how the photo appears. I once saw an …

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Category: Book Proposals, Pitch, Pitching, PlatformTag: Author Photos, book proposals
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