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Cover Letter Catastrophe: Mistakes That Miss Opportunities

By Megan Brownon October 12, 2023
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Every morning, I grab my favorite coffee cup and nestle into my rolling office chair to check my email. I never know what awaits me in my inbox. But more often than not, the cover letter meant to get my attention has painted a less-than-positive picture of the writer who sent it. In a matter of mere seconds, I can tell if the writer in question has taken the time to build a quality cover letter. Or if, in a steam of haste and hurry, submitted whatever he or she happened to blurt out onto the page before hitting the send button.

As a writer, I totally get it. I mean, I literally misspelled my own name on a cover letter once. The anxiety-ridden frenzy with which I hurriedly assembled all of my pitch assets was absolutely bonkers. I wanted to quickly send all of my documents and overcome the nervous turning of my stomach by just getting all of it over with–without proofreading. I regretted it immediately once I spotted my obvious error on the front page. My mom, who is an avid quilter, has a saying that I try to remember: “Measure twice. Cut once.”

But as a literary agent, a messy or half-thought-out cover letter is anything but cute. Reading through choppy sentences or glaring misspellings usually results in a swift rejection or a lack of belief in potential projects.

Here are a few of the “red flags” that quickly turn agents off and fix-actions that can help you avoid them.

First, communicate in a professional tone versus being casual or too friendly.

Pitching a book requires a polished presentation and purposed verbiage. Writing a cover letter in a fashion that feels like a catch-up coffee with a friend doesn’t communicate the kind of professionalism you want when pitching. I would also recommend ditching the urge to decorate or embellish the front of your cover letter. At best, it is a distraction.

Instead, I recommend a salutation, one or two sentences explaining why you chose to send this particular proposal to the intended agent, and a one-sentence thesis statement of your book. Opening your cover letter with concise wording and sharing your goals up front goes a long way.

Next, don’t open with the sentence “My life story could be a book.”

Please hear the encouragement here. I believe everybody is called to write their story and share it with those they love or people who could benefit. There is something unbelievably cathartic to writing one’s story and capturing wisdom on the page.

However, pitching a project for publishing requires writers to showcase skill, craft, and creativity and the propensity for success. Lead with credentials and then experience. I am always on the lookout for books that are written by people with authoritative credentials and training. Share your background as a subject-matter expert, or detail your relevant education. Tell me what area of expertise qualifies you to pitch a book for publishing, and give me the relevant information I need to see you can run the marathon of manuscript writing.

When it comes to comparable writing, or establishing your unique position in the market, use descriptor words that communicate how you are different.

Don’t compare your writing to the profound writers of the faith by saying, “I’m the next Charles Spurgeon” or “This book could be the next New York Times Best Seller.” Instead, tell me more about your unique voice, qualifications, or intentions. I want to know how you are contextualized, distinct, or intentionally stepping into something new.

Finally, please include a statement letting me know if you have sent this to multiple agents.

And make sure to include your contact information. It is continually surprising to me how many submissions I receive without any cover letter or contact information.

Be encouraged, friend. Writing is a long-game career and passion. The timing is low and slow. My honest advice when it comes to submissions and cover letters is to take the time to develop and sharpen your pitch assets (the proposal, one sheet, website, etc.) and enjoy the journey. Establish yourself as an authoritative voice in your area of interest by communicating clearly in your cover letter and submissions. Be meticulous and steadfast. It will be in these small, consistent areas that the work will shine through.

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Category: Book Proposals, Pitching

Empathy Maps: How to Discover Your Reader

By Megan Brownon September 28, 2023
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There are a handful of questions I ask aspiring writers to answer to determine if they have a good grasp on their concept or if their proposal could be a viable option for publishing. The first question is this: “Who are you serving?” Many times, the look I receive in response is wide-eyed and uncertain. If an aspiring author isn’t keenly aware of their reader–who they are, what they are …

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Category: Book Proposals, Career, Pitching, The Writing Life

Finding an Audience

By Dan Balowon September 27, 2023
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Christian authors can find it challenging to determine an audience for their books, mainly because Christian books are aimed at something different than age ranges. Christian books are often aimed at a “psychographic,” rather than a demographic. This means Christian books are often aimed at readers who have certain values, beliefs, and lifestyles, rather than an age range of males or females. No …

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Category: Book Proposals, Get Published, Marketing, Pitching, The Publishing Life

Do Gimmicks Work in a Book Proposal?

By Steve Laubeon July 31, 2023
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Here are a few “gimmicks” I’ve received over the years from people who mailed their book proposals to our office: Cover letter printed on fluorescent paper A twenty-dollar bill inside the SASE A wooden treasure chest full of chocolate gold coins A signed photo of basketball player Michael Jordan A rock (in a proposal about God as our rock) An 18″x24″ piece of artwork, …

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Endorsements: How Important Are They?

By Steve Laubeon July 17, 2023
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How important are endorsements? (Those “blurbs” on the back of a book that exclaim, “A real masterpiece!”) Let me answer with a question. When browsing a book title, do you look at the endorsements or notice who wrote the foreword or the introduction? I suspect you do without realizing it. And if you are unfamiliar with the author but you know the endorser, then you are …

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Category: Book Proposals, Writing CraftTag: Endorsements, Get Published, Proposals

What Are Agents Looking for in a Proposal?

By Megan Brownon June 21, 2023
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What is an agent looking for in a proposal? Well, they want to see your platform, your purpose, and your great writing. Platform Your platform is your reach and the number of readers you already serve. Are you blogging? Do you have a newsletter? If so, how many subscribers do you have? Do you share most of your writing on social media? How many followers do you have? Your platform should also …

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Don’t Write the Book Without the Blueprint

By Megan Brownon June 8, 2023
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What came first? The chicken or the egg? So many people have reached out and shared their amazing ideas for books with me. They have told me about everything from health and wellness to comics or cookbooks. But they’ve made the rookie mistake of writing a book without a proposal, believing a proposal can be easily constructed on the back end of writing a manuscript. No matter the concept or focus, …

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Who Decides to Publish Your Book?

By Steve Laubeon May 1, 2023
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The editor you met with at a writers conference liked your proposal and asked you to send it to her after the conference. She was already talking about format and promotional ideas. Or you submitted a proposal and received an enthusiastic response from the acquisitions editor. Four (or maybe six to eight) months later, a rejection letter showed up in your inbox. What happened? No matter how much …

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Category: Agents, Book Proposals, Career, Get Published, Pitching, The Publishing Life, The Writing LifeTag: book proposals, Get Published, Publishing Decision

What I’m Looking For – Megan Brown

By Megan Brownon April 25, 2023
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[Megan is currently on sabbatical and is not accepting new proposals or taking new clients. Please contact another agent in our company.] As a reader who became a writer, I can certainly say God has sparked a flame in my heart for the written word, specifically His Word. In learning to study the Bible, line by line and verse by verse, I felt completely consumed with wanting to know more. Seventeen …

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Category: Agents, Book Proposals, Pitching

Ways to Delight a Literary Agent

By Steve Laubeon February 13, 2023
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Last week I highlighted some things that tend to annoy a literary agent. Let’s flip that around and reflect on a few things that get our attention. Another drum roll please: 1. Follow the guidelines on an agency’s website. (Those are there for a reason. It helps sift, at one level, those who are wanting to be professionals and those who aren’t. Note they are …

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Category: Agency, Agents, Book Proposals, Conferences, Pitch, Pitching, Platform, The Writing Life
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