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Today Is a Great Day to (re)Write

By Steve Laubeon May 6, 2024
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James Michener, the bestselling novelist, once said, “I’m not a very good writer, but I’m an excellent rewriter.” And today is your day to follow suit.

No one knows your work or what you are trying to accomplish better than you. In that sense, you can be your own best editor.

In a 1958 interview with The Paris Review, Ernest Hemingway was asked,

“How much rewriting do you do?”

Hemingway replied, “It depends. I rewrote the ending to Farewell to Arms, the last page of it, thirty-nine times before I was satisfied.”

The stunned interviewer asked, “Was there some technical problem there? What was it that had stumped you?”

Hemingway said simply, “Getting the words right.”

Roald Dahl, the author of Charlie and the Chocolate Factory, said, “By the time I am nearing the end of a story, the first part will have been reread and altered and corrected at least one hundred and fifty times. I am suspicious of both facility and speed. Good writing is essentially rewriting. I am positive of this.”

It is the same for both fiction and nonfiction since the principles are similar.

Overall Structure

Does your book have a natural flow? Do things build toward a goal, or do they flit about like a confused rabbit?

Recently, I heard from a number of professionals who have started having someone else read their work-in-progress out loud. This is better than reading it out loud yourself because an objective reader could put the wrong emphasis on the wrong word and change the meaning of the paragraph.

Could you rearrange things better? I once suggested a client remove three chapters from their nonfiction proposal to bring the total to 13. Thirteen weeks equals a typical quarter of a year, which fits many small group and curriculum requirements.

Consider numbers when structuring something like a devotional. 365 days. 90 days. 60 days. 31 days. And remember that 40 days is the number of days in Lent. But having something with 112 readings doesn’t add any sort of marketing angle to the project.

Word Choices

Look for repetitive words or pet phrases. One time, I noticed a client’s proposal mentioned the number of years they had been doing something in consecutive chapters. The repetitive sentence most likely crept in during some previous cuts and text rearrangement, but when I read it the first time, the information jumped out as completely unnecessary.

Years ago, I worked with a great writer who loved to use the word very. I crossed off nearly every instance of the word. After sending him the manuscript, I received an email with the word very repeated 500 times. He said he was trying to get them out of his system.

In an interview with The New York Times Magazine, captured on YouTube, comedian Jerry Seinfeld discussed how he can spend up to two years developing a joke. No matter what you think of him as a comedian, you must admire this attention to craft. The seeming simplicity of finding the right “funny” word consumes his creative process.

What Is the Best Method?

There is no sure-fire method of writing or even rewriting. A lot depends on the writer and their “perfectionist gene.” Some can turn off the fixer in their mind and happily plink away until the book is complete. For others, they have a hard time letting it go.

I like to advise writers, especially those new to book writing, to finish the whole thing and then go back and edit. This way, you will know you can finish a book, and you will realize how much you don’t know about writing a book!

Few people are inerrant when writing a first draft. That is the point. Get the idea on “paper,” then step back to understand the entire project.

I know many writers who write by the seat-of-the-pants. They don’t know what’s going to happen until they write it! There is a general sense of direction but no “map” they are following.

Another couple of writers have told me they write their novels in scenes, but they do not write them consecutively. They may write scene 170 today and scene 46 tomorrow. The challenge for them is tying them all together cohesively when they finish.

Yet another writer uses an Excel spreadsheet with the entire book laid out, with approximate word count for each chapter and a row showing their word-count progress as they write each day.

The bottom line is that you find the method that works for you. Listen to everyone else’s methods out of curiosity and for ideas, but no one method is the best way.

Today Is Your Day

It is quite possible to tinker with something until it no longer works. But today, release that fear and tinker away. Insert a different anecdote into your presentation. Try a different opening to your story. Give yourself a few hours of dedicated revision.

Your Turn

What are your favorite methods for effective self-editing? Post them in the comments below.

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Category: Craft, Editing, Writing CraftTag: Editing, Writing Craft

E Is for Editor

By Steve Laubeon October 2, 2023
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Your editor can be your best friend in the industry (besides your agent, of course). Or your editor can be your worst enemy. Bad Side First An editor who doesn’t reply to your email inquiries or return your phone calls is either ignoring you on purpose or is so busy with other pressing matters they can’t get to yours. If you have this problem, make sure you didn’t create it in …

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Category: Book Business, Career, Editing, Publishing A-Z, Writing CraftTag: Editing, Editors

My Editor Made My Book Worse!

By Steve Laubeon May 16, 2022
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You just received a 15 page single spaced editorial letter from your publisher. They want you to rewrite most of the book. But you disagree with the letter and are spitting mad. What do you do?

Or your agent took a look at your manuscript and told you to cut it in half to make it sellable. What do you do?

Both examples are true stories and illustrate the universal …

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Category: Craft, Editing, Steve, Writing CraftTag: Editing, Writing Craft

When Editorial Errors Matter

By Steve Laubeon September 20, 2021
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Writers make mistakes. It happens. Often an editor’s job is to be the safety net and catch those tidbits that find their way into an early draft of a manuscript for any number of reasons.

The simplicity of “cut & paste” has created more opportunity for error than ever before. I've seen half sentences left in their original place because the writer failed to cut and …

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Category: Book Business, Craft, E-Books, Editing, Grammar, Steve, Writing CraftTag: Editing, Errors, Writing Craft

Ancient Wisdom from an Ancient Editor

By Steve Laubeon May 17, 2021
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I came across a remarkable section in a book written around 124 B.C. The editor of the book wrote the following preface to help the reader understand his methodology and purpose. It shows the concern a good editor has for the ultimate reader. His job was to abridge a massive five volume work into an abbreviated 16,00 word document. Can anyone tell me where this comes from and …

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Category: Book Business, Craft, Editing, Grammar, Writing CraftTag: Editing, Wisdom, Writing Craft

Proofreading: Tips and Tricks

By Steve Laubeon March 8, 2021
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[Since today, March 8th, is National Proofreading Day I thought I would re-post this article from a few years ago, with some revisions. I’ve left the comments attached below since so many were illustrative. Please add new thoughts as well.] I have regularly displayed my lack of proofreading skills in past blog posts. In fact, it got so bad I’ve had to hire someone to proofread my posts …

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Category: Book Proposals, Career, Craft, Editing, Writing CraftTag: Editing, Proofreading, Writing Craft

When the Gloves Come Off

By Steve Laubeon August 17, 2020
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Fist Slams Table in Anger

The publishing experience is rarely done in isolation. This means working with other people. And if their performances or efforts do not meet your expectations, conflict can occur. Over the years I’ve seen more conflict than you can imagine–of all types and variety. But the majority of issues boil down to four areas: Editorial Production (cover design?) Marketing and publicity Getting …

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Category: Book Business, Career, Communication, EditingTag: Career, Communication, Editing, Money

Every Word Counts

By Steve Laubeon May 13, 2019
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The popularity of last week's post on the phrase counter set me on a journey to find something that would do the same sort of "counting" but instead focus on single word usage instead of phrases.

Use this link to the Word Counter web site and run your WIP (work in progress) within its walls.

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Category: Editing, Grammar, Writing CraftTag: Editing, words

Four Myths About Editors

By Tamela Hancock Murrayon August 16, 2018
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Since even the most prolific authors’ experience with editors may be limited to one or two, editors can seem mythical. Let’s unwrap a few assumptions: 1)  Editors don’t have to worry about the market. Agents advise writers to consider the market when writing. This is because editors do have to worry about the market and must make their acquiring decisions at least partially with the market in …

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Category: Editing, Get PublishedTag: Editing, Editors

Your Obligation to Your Editor

By Tamela Hancock Murrayon May 3, 2018
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You’ve done all the hard work of writing and pitching a book and now your agent has secured a contract for you. Congratulations! Now you’re set to work with an editor! You may have met the editor at a conference. You may have talked with the editor many times during 15-minute pitch sessions over several years. You may have attended their workshops and spotlight sessions at conferences. This may be …

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Category: Editing, The Writing LifeTag: Editing, Editor, The Writing Life
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