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Make Me Jump off the Fence

By Tamela Hancock Murrayon May 18, 2017
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So, when querying me, maybe you followed my guidelines, submitted an appropriate manuscript, and your work has much to recommend itself. So why am I not getting back to you right away? Am I ignoring you? I’m sure it feels that way, and I’m sorry.

What has probably happened is that your manuscript (and yours is not alone), has me sitting on the fence. Think about that expression. Who wants to sit on a fence? It can’t be comfortable!

I may be on the fence for reasons, including but not limited to:

  1. I have several submissions in your category and am unsure if yours is The One.
  2. I’m not sure if your platform is sufficient for me to take the leap.
  3. I’m unsure if your topic will work.
  4. I’m debating if your manuscript has a chance in a crowded market.
  5. I’m undecided about your writing style or voice.

What do all these points have in common? That’s right: uncertainty.

In other words, your submission is good, but is it one I think I can sell? As you know, reputable agents don’t charge a fee to market manuscripts to editors. I don’t get paid unless I sell your work, so we are partners. When your book is rejected, both you and I are rejected. I’m not shrugging my shoulders while pocketing your hard-earned fee. I’m taking a chance with you.

For everyone’s sake, I need the chance I take to be based on my knowledge and experience, not whimsy or even my high opinion of you personally. I have to be selective about the books I choose to represent.

Though this process has its frustrations, there are significant benefits. One is that editors don’t get swamped with hundreds of terrible manuscripts that authors paid agents to pitch. Instead, when an agent submits a proposal, that agent says she thinks the project will fit with the publisher and editor, and she is saying she believes in the book and the author.

So Now What?

Being ignored is no fun, but the most painful experiences are often the most instructive. Now is a good time to go back over your proposal and see what spark it’s missing that keeps it from getting a response. Or send out a proposal for a different project and see if that resonates. Whichever path you take, make sure the proposal and manuscript sparkle. Do everything you can to get the agent excited about you and your work. Make the agent jump off the fence.

Your turn:

How many books did you submit before an agent jumped off the fence?

What do you think is key to getting an agent to respond to a proposal?

 

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Category: Book Proposals, Get Published, PitchTag: book proposals, Get Published

Ignored? Could be an Error or a Philosophy

By Tamela Hancock Murrayon May 11, 2017
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This post is inspired by a question posed by Cindy (Thank you!) on a recent entry regarding rejection. (Click here to find the original entry) Despite following all the guidelines, this author never received a response from an agent and wondered why. The reasons may be quite simple: Office Error My office tries not to ignore emails, although we certainly aren’t mistake-proof. If we ignored you, …

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Category: Agents, Book Proposals

Criticizing the Reader

By Tamela Hancock Murrayon May 4, 2017
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Since I’ve been in publishing, I’ve heard rumblings of why can’t Christian novels be “edgy” or “better” in avoiding tropes, formulas, and the like. In other words, why can’t Christians write and publish great literature? Know that the definition of great literature varies from person to person. A Google search reveals many articles on this topic. But when an author submits what he labels …

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Category: Book Business, ReadingTag: Book Business, Literary Fiction, Reading

Are You Sure You Want to Write Great Literature?

By Tamela Hancock Murrayon April 27, 2017
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“′Classic′ – a book which people praise and don’t read.” – Mark Twain At my college preparatory school, our vacations weren’t unfettered thanks to “Summer Reading” that required us to read four books during break. Our list going from seventh to eighth grade was limited to four books so we had no choices. I only remember two – Pride and Prejudice and The Oxbow Incident. I’m sure none of …

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Category: Reading, The Writing LifeTag: Reading, Writing Craft

Repeal and Replace

By Tamela Hancock Murrayon April 20, 2017
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Writers live full and demanding lives. Let’s become more focused and productive with my unscientific version of Repeal and Replace! Repeal: Exhaustion. Replace: Go to bed earlier. Even fifteen minutes can help. If you like how you feel, shave off a few more minutes until you find that perfect bedtime. The more often enough rest helps you be vibrant the next day, the more you realize how little you …

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Category: Personal, The Writing LifeTag: The Writing Life

Maundy Thursday

By Tamela Hancock Murrayon April 13, 2017
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Today is Maundy Thursday, a special day during Passion Week. As you feel led, visit this passage regarding The Last Supper, and meditate upon it. I can never read this passage without thinking about how often I have disappointed Christ. And no matter how much I deny it, no matter how much I wish I were perfect, I am not. I will wretchedly and miserably betray Him again. And yet He forgives. I am …

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Category: Theology

Tell the Truth

By Tamela Hancock Murrayon April 6, 2017
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I’m writing this post because of inspiration provided by comments from my readers. Thank you, readers! Recently I blogged about seasoning our words with salt. If you haven’t read the comments on that blog, I recommend you do because they are insightful and uplifting. That post referred mainly to social media, but this post applies to all parts of life, and even to some fiction. For example, …

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Category: Social Media, The Writing Life, TheologyTag: Career, The Writing Life

Frustrated by Rejection or No Response? Try This

By Tamela Hancock Murrayon March 30, 2017
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Last week I wrote about authors who send agents submissions despite the fact those agents clearly state that they don’t represent those categories. When this happens, I sense one of three things from the author: exuberance, ignorance, or frustration. Exuberance An author who’s been successful for decades still can be exuberant about her work. That’s not what I mean here. In this case, the author …

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Category: Book Proposals, Pitch, Pitching, PlatformTag: Agents, book proposals, Frustration, Pitching

Do You Really Want to Change Our Minds?

By Tamela Hancock Murrayon March 23, 2017
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Agents know how difficult it is to break in to publishing, to keep your stride as a midlist author, and to stay on top once you’re there. We realize where you’re coming from when you send us something we say we don’t represent, thinking it’s so wonderful we might change our minds. Maybe it is that wonderful. Maybe we might change our minds. But is that what you really want? Let’s look at two …

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Category: Agents, Book ProposalsTag: Agents, book proposals

The Ambitious Author

By Tamela Hancock Murrayon March 16, 2017
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Recently my office received an unsolicited submission from an author unfamiliar to us. Of course, this is not unusual. But here is a list of what is unusual: The submission was openly cc’ed to 185 agents. The author sent writing samples for 28 books. The author said she wants to write across all genres. At least one entry offered graphic detail of a sexual encounter. The author stated her age as …

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Category: Agents, Book ProposalsTag: book proposals, Queries
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