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Nail the Hook, Nail the Book

By Bob Hostetleron June 4, 2025
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I get together often with other writers—at conferences, online, via email, etc. So I’m often asked, “What are you looking for as an agent?” My typical answer: “Irresistible hooks and irresistible writing.”

When I say that, I’m talking about both fiction and nonfiction. And you’ll notice I didn’t mention that wretched word “platform.” To be fair, I don’t mind “irresistible platforms,” either; but in my experience, an irresistible hook and irresistible writing can overcome a modest platform. More so, I think than an irresistible platform can overcome the lack of an irresistible hook and irresistible writing.

I’ll also often say, “Nail the hook, nail the book.” At least in my own writing life, I often find that when I’ve landed on a great hook, the book takes shape, if not effortlessly, at least energetically.

So, what’s a “hook,” and how do you nail it?

Good questions (which usually means you’re about to get a lousy answer). A great hook:

    • grabs attention,
    • sparks interest,
    • defines what’s unique about your project,
    • makes (or hints at) a promise.

And all in a few words—no more than a sentence or two.

This is true for both fiction and nonfiction. For fiction hooks, I’ll often suggest writers think in “movie trailer” voice: “One man. One woman. Unforgiving wilderness.” Or to borrow from Louis Sachar’s Holes: “There is no lake at the boys’ detention center they call Camp Green Lake. But there are an awful lot of holes.”

A great fiction hook promises, “Stick with me, and I’ll deliver something worth your time.” A great nonfiction hook promises a definite reward, a met need. For example, “You could keep trying to fit in…. Or you could rest in where you already fit” (from Dr. Saundra Dalton-Smith’s new release, Being Fully Known: The Joyful Satisfaction of Beholding, Becoming, and Belonging). Sometimes the title (and/or subtitle) is a hook itself, as in Dr. Dalton-Smith’s book or Susan U. Neal’s 12 Ways to Age Gracefully: How to Look and Feel Younger.

I suggest spending as much time as necessary on your hooks—brainstorming, mind-mapping, trying different approaches, and critique-group-testing. After all, the hook is your book’s first impression; it should hit hard and deep. And if you really nail the hook, you’re more likely to sell your book to an agent, editor—and ultimately—reader.

 

 

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Category: Book Proposals, Pitching

What Is the Best Way to Submit My Self-Published Book?

By Steve Laubeon April 21, 2025
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We are asked this question so frequently that I have to re-run this post on a regular basis! Since it has become so easy to self-publish, many authors are creating their own books, both in ebook and print form. Later, those authors are not quite sure what to do if/when they want to approach an agent. Or pitch to an editor at a conference. Should they just send a copy of the book with a letter? Or …

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Category: Book Proposals, Indie, Self-PublishingTag: book proposals, Get Published, Self-Publishing

Think Like a Marketer

By Tamela Hancock Murrayon March 19, 2025
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When we submit a book to a major publishing house, we forget how much money we are asking them to invest in us. Consider the publisher’s commitment to pay top editors for several rounds of edits, artists for the cover design, and the sales team for marketing. I’m leaving out key people, but you get the idea. Emphasizing your marketing knowledge and ability helps a proposal shine. When writing your …

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Category: Book Proposals, Get Published, Marketing, Pitching

Commercial Writing (The Word Count Question)

By Dan Balowon February 27, 2025
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One of the common questions I get as an agent relates to how long a book should be. Many aspiring authors think about a target number of pages and chapters when they need to focus on word count. Using pages as a metric for book length likely comes from those who self-publish and are accustomed to being charged per page for their book. Depending on the type of project, there is an optimum word …

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Category: Book Proposals, Pitching, The Writing LifeTag: word count

How Do You Know What Will (or Will Not) Sell?

By Steve Laubeon February 24, 2025
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There is a mysterious magic embedded in the mythos of the publishing industry: the ability to pick successful books. I was recently asked, “You say ‘no’ so often, how do you know when to say ‘yes?’” I wish I could claim that every agent and publisher have a secret formula we consult to know what will sell. Ask any group of us for that secret and we will all laugh because there is no “secret.” We …

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Category: Book Business, Book Proposals, Branding, Career, PlatformTag: Agents, book proposals, Career, Pitching, What Sells, Writers

Bring the Books (What Steve Laube Is Looking For)

By Steve Laubeon January 13, 2025
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(Updated 1/13/2025) “Bring the books, especially the parchments,” is a sentence in 2 Timothy 4:13 that has teased readers for 2,000 years. What books did the Apostle Paul want to read while waiting for trial? Theology? History? How-to? (Maybe a little escape reading? Pun intended.) Another writer chimed in a while ago by saying, “Of making many books there is no end” (Ecclesiastes 12:12). And if …

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Category: Agency, Book Proposals, Creativity, TrendsTag: Agency, book proposals

What I Am Looking For (Dan Balow)

By Dan Balowon January 9, 2025
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(Updated 1/9/2025) The longer I am around Christian publishing, the more I see history repeat itself. Steve Laube and I will often comment to each other about how many of the bestselling authors in the Christian book world are the same today as they were a generation ago. So, this work has a substantial element of “the more things change, the more they stay the same.” What am I looking for in book …

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Category: Agency, Book ProposalsTag: Agency, book proposals

Who and What I’m Looking For (Bob Hostetler)

By Bob Hostetleron January 8, 2025
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(Updated 1/8/2025) As another year dawns, much has changed—and much remains the same—in the world of Christian publishing. With all that in mind, let me offer an updated answer, as up-to-the-minute as I can make it, to the frequent question I field from aspiring, developing, accomplished, and skilled writers: “What are you looking for?” Influence Aspiring writers often imagine, “Once I have a book …

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Category: Agency, Agents, Book ProposalsTag: Agency, Agents, Get Published

Book Proposals I’d Love to See (What Tamela Hancock Murray Is Looking For)

By Tamela Hancock Murrayon January 7, 2025
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(Updated 1/7/2025) I’m thankful to the Lord that I’m a literary agent working for Him in Christian publishing. I’m grateful to the readers of this blog for being part of our writing community. As for approaching me with your work, let’s see if our passions match: Christian Romantic Suspense and Suspense Readers of Christian romantic suspense and suspense are a large and devoted …

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Category: Agency, Book Business, Book Proposals, Career, Craft, Creativity, Romance, Trends, Writing CraftTag: Agency, book proposals

Are You Pitch Perfect?

By Steve Laubeon December 2, 2024
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A critical key to landing a book deal is the presentation of your idea in such a way that the editor or agent is completely sold on the concept. In musical terms, perfect pitch is the rare talent to name or pick out a note without having any reference point. This is illustrated by this youtube video where they clear your mind, then give you a tone, and ask you to name the note; most people fail …

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Category: Book Proposals, PitchingTag: book proposals, Pitching
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