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The Art of the Sentence

By Bob Hostetleron July 11, 2018
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A month or so ago I asked some social media friends what sentence from a book rocked their world. The replies were delightful, and I shared some of them in my June 27 post on this site, titled “In Praise of Memorable Sentences.” There were too many, however, to include them all at that time, so I offer the rest below, with  the author, title, and (in parentheses) the friend who answered my question:

“This is what they do for us, both books and friends: they remind us what it is to be human.” Barbara Hambly, Homeland (Kim Hampton).

“Then she noticed that there was something crunching under her feet. The Lion, the Witch, and the Wardrobe, C. S. Lewis (Joshua J. Masters).

“There is no one like us when we are gone, but then there is no one like anyone else, ever.” Keep Moving, Dick Van Dyke (Judy Gyde).

“People will take a limitation from their external environment, internalize it, exaggerate it, and bolster it in their imaginations until they’ve shackled themselves.” Reality-Based Leadership, Cy Wakeman (Kass Fogle).

 “All we have to decide is what to do with the time that’s been given us.” The Fellowship of the Ring, J. R. R. Tolkein (Lisa Sucaciu Kibler).

“Stay gold, Ponyboy.” The Outsiders, S. E. Hinton (Cheryl Lynn Childers).

 “If I find in myself a desire which no experience in this world can satisfy, the most probable explanation is that I was made for another world.” Mere Christianity, C. S. Lewis (Annette Marie Griffin).

“But detours, roundabouts, and imperfections, as the incarnation͛s setting straight of our sidetracked humanity makes clear, are the paths used by the Spirit to take us home.” Nudge, Len Sweet (Chip Kelly).

“There is no cure for being who you truly are.” The Mermaid’s Sister, Carrie Anne Noble (Kristen Stieffel).

“You never really understand a person until you consider things from his point of view…until you climb in his skin and walk around in it.” To Kill a Mockingbird, Harper Lee (Melissa Sivels).

“Perhaps when you are old and are one day counting up your assets, you may be awed to come across twelve baskets of bread and fish among your family treasures.” Parents in Pain, John White (Dianne Barker).

“How old is the child driving your emotional car, and is he or she old enough to have a license?” The Missing Commandment: Love Yourself, Jerry and Denise Basel (David Sanford).

“Jesus didn’t see a human interruption; He saw a divine appointment.” Wild Goose Chase, Mark Batterson (Cathy Baker).

“No one helps the poor like the poor.” City of Joy, Dominique Lapierre (Elaine Joyce Rader).

“We need to be crushed in order for our fruit to make wine for the needs of others.” The Christian Home: A Woman’s View, Shirley Rice (Callie Law Daruk).

“You got to know where your towel is.” The Hitchhiker’s Guide to the Galaxy, Douglas Adams (Nigel Horridge).

These bits of paper [telegrams] which could fall from stunned hands and blow about in the knife-sharp wind, which told you that the boy you’d suckled, bathed, scolded and cried over, was—well—wasn’t.” The Light Between Oceans, M. L. Stedman (Nancy Lohr).

“The trunks of the trees too were dusty and the leaves fell early that year and we saw the troops marching along the road and the dust rising and leaves, stirred by the breeze, falling and the soldiers marching and afterward the road bare and white except for the leaves.” A Farewell to Arms, Ernest Hemingway (Lawrence W. Wilson).

“Wisdom is the power to see, and the inclination to choose, the best and highest goal, together with the surest means of attaining it.” Knowing God, J. I. Packer (Michelle Mann Adserias).

“When we walk, praying for guidance, to the edge of all the light we have and breathlessly take that first step into the foggy mystery of the unknown, we must believe that one of two things will happen: either God will provide us with something rock-solid to land on and stand on, or he will teach us how to fly.” The Crime of Living Cautiously, Luci Shaw (Joyce Ellis).

“I was on fire.” The Glass Castle, Jeannette Walls (Linda Clare).

It’s amazing, isn’t it, the power that a single sentence can hold? It is also a valuable lesson for writers (of both fiction and nonfiction)—not just to write sentences, but to craft them.

What about you? Do you have a favorite sentence to add to the list?

 

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Category: Craft, Writing CraftTag: Craft, Sentences, Writing Craft

You Are Not Your Words

By Bob Hostetleron December 6, 2017
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Writers love words. That’s a good thing. But when we become attached to our own words, that’s a bad thing. I see it often in meeting with writers and offering critiques at writers’ conferences. The writer will hand me a piece of his or her work, “to see what you think.” I’ll look it over, and identify several things to compliment about the piece. And then I’ll make a suggestion for improvement. I …

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Category: Rejection, Reviews, The Writing LifeTag: Craft, Rejection, The Writing Life

Read It Twice!

By Tamela Hancock Murrayon November 30, 2017
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I read Gone with the Wind for the first time in the seventh grade. Then I reread it in the eighth grade. Daddy fussed at me for this. “Why are you reading the same book again? You should read something else.” I know he had a point, but I consumed it a second time, all the way to the ambiguous, 1,200-page end. Because. I. Wanted. To. By the way, the unsettling ending is probably one reason why I …

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Category: Craft, ReadingTag: Craft, Reading

Beyond the Hook: What Makes Your Reader Care?

By Tamela Hancock Murrayon November 2, 2017
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Any book lover who’s made the hobby of reading a lifelong habit can name stories that kept him reading well past anything else – dinner, chores, bedtime… What makes this happen? The Problem Sympathetic characters can help as a start, but while they serve to draw in a reader, the story’s dilemma itself keeps the reader engaged. The reader can’t put the book down until the characters solve the …

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Category: Craft, Writing CraftTag: Characters, Craft

Beyond the Hook: Writing Sympathetic Characters

By Tamela Hancock Murrayon October 26, 2017
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The first page may be promising. The opening chapters may be engrossing. But a reader might still abandon your book if it doesn’t deliver. How can you keep your readers going? Sympathetic Characters Some writers are talented in creating sympathetic characters from page one. Perhaps Page one occurs during a fire, when the characters have lost everything. Or the heroine has been abandoned by a …

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Category: Craft, Creativity, Editing, Romance, Romantic SuspenseTag: Characters, Craft, Reading

Six Books I’ve Already Recommended

By Bob Hostetleron August 16, 2017
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I have been a literary agent for a whole month now. I’m still waiting for my anniversary letter and gift from the Steve Laube Agency. I’m sure it’s on the way. I would say it has been a whirlwind so far, but that would be a cliché. And clichés are old hat. But I already feel blessed by the interactions I’ve had with clients, potential clients, editors, fellow agents, and others. And what is more …

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Category: Book Review, Craft, Writing CraftTag: Book Review, Craft, Writing Craft

Writing Cinematically: 10 Movie Techniques to Apply to Your Novel 

By Guest Bloggeron June 19, 2017
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Our guest blogger today is Deborah Raney. We have had the fun of working together since I first became an agent. It also happens that while at Bethany House I was one of the first to review the proposal which became her first novel, A Vow to Cherish, (the inspiration for the World Wide Pictures film of the same title) and launched Deb’s writing career. Twenty years and thirty-plus books later, …

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Category: Craft, Writing CraftTag: Cinematic Technique, Craft, Writing Craft

Time to Play!

By Karen Ballon May 31, 2017
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As I was considering what to write for this week’s blog, I realized I needed a break from all the seriousness of the last few weeks. Not that I don’t love the “conversations” and insights everyone has shared. But, at the core, I’m a golden-retriever kinda gal, and I gots to play! So today seemed perfect for a game I love: First Lines. SO! Get your play on, folks, and share your first line—and ONLY …

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Category: Craft, CreativityTag: Craft, Creativity, first lines

A Typo Hear, a Typo Their – Typo, Typo, Everywhere

By Steve Laubeon May 22, 2017
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Is it just me or am I starting to find typos more frequently than ever before? I’m not a copy-editor or a proofreader, so I don’t go looking for them. Unfortunately they find me. My wife finds them regularly in the sports section of our daily newspaper (The Arizona Republic owned by the same people who own USA Today). It is embarrassing. I suspect budget cuts eliminated an extra set of …

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Category: Craft, GrammarTag: Craft, Grammar

Contrived is a Four-Letter Word

By Karen Ballon February 8, 2017
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Few things irritate fiction readers more than a story peopled by characters who act and react without any apparent reason for what they’re doing and saying. No reason, that is, except to illustrate the author’s message. Or prove the author’s point. Well, you say, don’t we all have a message or point in what we write? Isn’t fiction about letting our characters take the readers on a journey of …

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Category: CraftTag: Craft, fiction, Writing Craft
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