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A Literary Agent’s Wish List

By Bob Hostetleron May 27, 2021
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People often ask me, “What are you looking for?” It’s a natural question to ask a literary agent, even when the questioner knows that the agent has offered a detailed answer on the agency website (here, for example). After all, something could’ve changed. I may, since updating my interests, have suddenly decided to get bold, branch out, and try to sell a systematic theology in iambic pentameter. You never know.

So, while that post I linked to above remains a pretty good answer for me (and my colleagues and superiors in The Steve Laube Agency have also offered their answers, which can always be found in the right-hand sidebar on the site’s blog page), I started an addendum and then asked the other agents to offer their additions. So, without further doobie-doobie-do, here’s a literary agent’s “top ten” wish list of the things I wish writers would send to me:

  1. A “cover” email addressed to me
    This may seem hardly worth mentioning, but it is worth mentioning. I all too often receive email submissions (the only kind I invite, other than at writers conferences, where I’m usually handed a hard-copy pitch) with a salutation salutating someone else (Steve? Don? Smedley?) or a generic greeting (“Dear Agent”). I much prefer “Dear Bob.” Or “Your Excellency.”
  2. A submission that’s appropriate for the agency
    I know that not everyone takes the time to read all the way to the third line of the agency description on our home page (which refers to “the Christian marketplace”). I also know that when a writer has put in so much work already in getting a proposal ready for submission to an agent, it can seem like such a bother to learn a little about an agent or agency (beyond the contact info in some book, magazine, or website’s listing of agents). But this is my wish list, right? I wish for submissions that aren’t riddled with profanity or don’t present an unbiblical or anti-Christian perspective.
  3. A submission that’s about what I said I was looking for
    I’m often amazed by submissions that say either, “Having looked over the information on your website, I think you’ll be interested in my fantasy/sci-fi/erotic novel,” or “I know you say you don’t represent poetry collections, but I think the attached will change your mind.” Never am. Never does.
  4. An irresistible hook
    Aspiring and developing writers don’t always know what a hook (for a book idea or a book proposal) is, and even accomplished and published writers sometimes struggle with writing good or great hooks. However, it’s worth brainstorming and laboring over, because I love it when I see an irresistible hook, one that in a few words says what’s unique and compelling about this book.
  5. Irresistible writing
    When people stop me on the street or at a writers conference to ask, “What are you looking for?” my pat answer is usually, “Irresistible hooks and irresistible writing.” They’re both that important. You don’t have to write like Hemingway, or Lucado, or anyone else; in fact, it’s best if you don’t write like anyone else. But I want to be unable to stop reading your sample chapters. I want to be so enthralled that I can’t wait to request the full manuscript.
  6. Clean copy
    Sure, not everyone is a grammar freak, punctuation expert, or spelling champion. But everyone has the same tools: dictionaries, thesauri, spell check, proofreading techniques, and so on. So, I love it when I see clean copy in a proposal and manuscript.
  7. Professional presentation
    By professional presentation, I mean the look and feel, not only of a proposal or manuscript, but of the writer himself or herself. The author’s website looks inviting and professional. The author photo looks clear and sharp (and doesn’t use up 10 MB of space). The proposal is organized and formatted well. And so on.
  8. A respectable platform
    Don’t click away just yet. I know you’re not a celebrity. You don’t have to be. But the marketing section of a proposal, which details the writer’s platform, needs to communicate that you understand the importance of reach and influence in today’s publishing world. I’ve often seen excellent writers seem to freeze and bumble their way through this section as if they forgot the fundamentals of good writing. But this section is a great place to showcase your writing. Put the best info in the first lines, the second-best in the last, and only the most helpful information in between. If your platform is still developing, show how it’s growing rapidly. Show that you have a pattern of reaching an audience with the message you’re writing.
  9. A comparisons section that shows good knowledge of your genre and/or solid research
    Don’t just list a few books off the top of your head. Don’t tell me that there’s nothing else like your book, as that probably indicates there’s no genre or market for it. I love it when a comps section clearly indicates to me, “I can see right where this author and book fit and why there’s a good chance of strong sales.”
  10. A delivered promise
    An editor of mine once impressed on me the importance of making a promise to the reader—and then delivering on that promise. I love it when a writer does both. 

That’s a lot, I know. But these are not unreachable standards. I know, because I represent writers who do them all.

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Category: Agents, Book Proposals, Craft, Grammar, Pitching, Platform, The Publishing Life, The Writing Life

O I C, U C?

By Bob Hostetleron May 20, 2021
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I’ve been a fan of James Taylor (he of “Fire and Rain” and “Carolina on My Mind” fame) since I first heard “Don’t Let Me Be Lonely Tonight” on the radio at a particularly lonely time in my life. That’s a story for another time; we won’t get into it right now. But from that day I bought or stole every album he ever released. On his 1979 release, Flag, he included a song titled “B.S.U.R. …

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Category: Humor, Inspiration

Ten Things to Quit Right Now

By Bob Hostetleron May 6, 2021
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Many writers—especially (but not exclusively) when they’re starting out on this long, uphill journey of writing for publication—are often tempted to quit. Some face that temptation even after they’ve published, and some even after much success. Because it’s hard. If it were easy, everyone would do it (nod to Jimmy Doogan in A League of Their Own). Still, sometimes the hard can get so hard—and …

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Category: The Writing Life

Procrastination Tips for Writers

By Bob Hostetleron April 28, 2021
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I was going to write this post months ago, but I kept putting it off. True story. Most writers don’t need much help procrastinating. Many of us will do almost anything to avoid the actual task of writing. It’s amazing how many things can distract us from our WIP (work-in-progress) or our WMNP (work-making-no-progress). Still, there may be someone out there in Writerland who needs a few …

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Category: The Writing Life, time management

A Common Platform Mistake

By Bob Hostetleron April 7, 2021
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Some time ago I received a submission that went something like this (names and details have been changed to protect the innocent, guilty, and all those in between): I’ve published three successful nonfiction books. All three, in the area of business and leadership, are still selling very well. One of them, coauthored with Bill Gates (with a foreword by Warren Buffett), reached bestseller status …

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Category: Book Proposals, Pitch, Pitching

Submission Mistakes of the More Subtle Variety

By Bob Hostetleron March 25, 2021
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I wrote a post on this blog a while ago (here) about some embarrassing and even disqualifying mistakes writers had made in submissions to me. One reader commented on that post, expressing gratitude and then adding, “What would be helpful to me is to hear the subtle or inadvertent mistakes aspiring authors make when sending a proposal to you. Can you help us with that?” Why, yes, Louise, since you …

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Category: Book Proposals, Economics, Pitching

A Cliché Simile Is a Bad Simile

By Bob Hostetleron February 24, 2021
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One of the many things I fairly harp on when I teach at writers conferences (full disclosure: I’m a fair harper) is the need to eliminate clichés from your writing. Seriously, they’re old hat.  One of the places clichés seem to creep in most often is in similes and metaphors. (Quick refresher: a simile is a figure of speech comparing two things, usually using “like” or “as,” while a metaphor is a …

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Category: Craft, Creativity, Grammar

A Writer’s Keyboard Prayer

By Bob Hostetleron February 11, 2021
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Lord God, my Father, my King, my Sovereign, my All, I RETURN to you with all my heart, I ENTER your presence with gratitude and joy, I ESCAPE into your arms and nestle in the shadow of your wing. DELETE the stain of worldly strife and wicked desires. SHIFT my attention and priorities to reflect your wishes. COMMAND me and bend me to your will. CONTROL my impulse, intellect, and intentions until I …

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Category: The Writing Life, Theology

A New Author Photo for a New Year?

By Bob Hostetleron February 3, 2021
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Not long ago, I signed one of my books for a friend. As he received it back from me, he turned to the back cover and pointed to my photo. “Who’s that?” he asked. He used to be a friend. So the book had been out for a few years, but truth be told (not that I’ve been lying up to now), the photo could have been more current. Much more. You may not age like I do (with the speed of a hare and grace of …

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Category: Branding, Career, Marketing

My Predictions for Your 2021

By Bob Hostetleron January 13, 2021
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You’d think, after 2020, we’d all have learned not to make predictions, right? Right? Of course, right. But I learn more slowly than most. So I thought I’d put forth a few predictions for your coming year, if you’re a writer. If you’re not a writer, most of these won’t apply to you. But if you are, I think I can confidently offer these twenty-five predictions: You will have bad writing days. You …

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