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Nail the Hook, Nail the Book

By Bob Hostetleron June 4, 2025
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I get together often with other writers—at conferences, online, via email, etc. So I’m often asked, “What are you looking for as an agent?” My typical answer: “Irresistible hooks and irresistible writing.”

When I say that, I’m talking about both fiction and nonfiction. And you’ll notice I didn’t mention that wretched word “platform.” To be fair, I don’t mind “irresistible platforms,” either; but in my experience, an irresistible hook and irresistible writing can overcome a modest platform. More so, I think than an irresistible platform can overcome the lack of an irresistible hook and irresistible writing.

I’ll also often say, “Nail the hook, nail the book.” At least in my own writing life, I often find that when I’ve landed on a great hook, the book takes shape, if not effortlessly, at least energetically.

So, what’s a “hook,” and how do you nail it?

Good questions (which usually means you’re about to get a lousy answer). A great hook:

    • grabs attention,
    • sparks interest,
    • defines what’s unique about your project,
    • makes (or hints at) a promise.

And all in a few words—no more than a sentence or two.

This is true for both fiction and nonfiction. For fiction hooks, I’ll often suggest writers think in “movie trailer” voice: “One man. One woman. Unforgiving wilderness.” Or to borrow from Louis Sachar’s Holes: “There is no lake at the boys’ detention center they call Camp Green Lake. But there are an awful lot of holes.”

A great fiction hook promises, “Stick with me, and I’ll deliver something worth your time.” A great nonfiction hook promises a definite reward, a met need. For example, “You could keep trying to fit in…. Or you could rest in where you already fit” (from Dr. Saundra Dalton-Smith’s new release, Being Fully Known: The Joyful Satisfaction of Beholding, Becoming, and Belonging). Sometimes the title (and/or subtitle) is a hook itself, as in Dr. Dalton-Smith’s book or Susan U. Neal’s 12 Ways to Age Gracefully: How to Look and Feel Younger.

I suggest spending as much time as necessary on your hooks—brainstorming, mind-mapping, trying different approaches, and critique-group-testing. After all, the hook is your book’s first impression; it should hit hard and deep. And if you really nail the hook, you’re more likely to sell your book to an agent, editor—and ultimately—reader.

 

 

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Category: Book Proposals, Pitching

Say auf Wiedersehen to Your Darlings

By Tamela Hancock Murrayon May 28, 2025
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I was in the middle of an important call on my office phone when my cell phone sang its little melody. SCHEDULING DEPT I hadn’t scheduled any appointments, so I let it go. The phone summoned me again less than a minute later. SCHEDULING DEPT Goodness! This must be urgent. I hung up on the other person with a promise to call back. SCHEDULING DEPT turned out to be a salesperson calling from a home …

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Things You Don’t Know You’re Saying

By Bob Hostetleron May 7, 2025
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Publishing is a funny business. Not funny “ha ha” but funny “strange.” And funny “mystical.” And funny “inscrutable.” Is that enough funny for you? Not laughing? That’s funny. But seriously, folks, one of those funny things I experience in my work as a literary agent is that people often say things they don’t mean to say, in person and in their book proposals (which is how I start the conversation …

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Think Like a Marketer

By Tamela Hancock Murrayon March 19, 2025
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When we submit a book to a major publishing house, we forget how much money we are asking them to invest in us. Consider the publisher’s commitment to pay top editors for several rounds of edits, artists for the cover design, and the sales team for marketing. I’m leaving out key people, but you get the idea. Emphasizing your marketing knowledge and ability helps a proposal shine. When writing your …

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Category: Book Proposals, Get Published, Marketing, Pitching

Commercial Writing (The Word Count Question)

By Dan Balowon February 27, 2025
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One of the common questions I get as an agent relates to how long a book should be. Many aspiring authors think about a target number of pages and chapters when they need to focus on word count. Using pages as a metric for book length likely comes from those who self-publish and are accustomed to being charged per page for their book. Depending on the type of project, there is an optimum word …

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Category: Book Proposals, Pitching, The Writing LifeTag: word count

Are You Pitch Perfect?

By Steve Laubeon December 2, 2024
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A critical key to landing a book deal is the presentation of your idea in such a way that the editor or agent is completely sold on the concept. In musical terms, perfect pitch is the rare talent to name or pick out a note without having any reference point. This is illustrated by this youtube video where they clear your mind, then give you a tone, and ask you to name the note; most people fail …

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Category: Book Proposals, PitchingTag: book proposals, Pitching

Write Your Passion

By Tamela Hancock Murrayon August 21, 2024
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When authors approach me with several ideas, I enjoy hearing their thoughts. I appreciate the tremendous creativity that goes into developing many books. I always give authors with tons of ideas the same advice: Write your passion. What if the book of your heart has no chance of being sold to a publisher, though? Write it anyway. Write with abandon, for your eyes only. Then write the next book, …

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Category: Book Proposals, Career, Pitching

New Book Proposal Course

By Steve Laubeon August 12, 2024
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I have some exciting news to share! The Christian Writers Institute has released an all-new edition of my “Elements of an Effective Book Proposal” course. Completely revised and expanded to provide even more value and insight. Why This Course Matters I have long taught that writing a book proposal is one of the most critical steps in securing a publishing deal. Whether you’re a …

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Category: Book Business, Book Proposals, Career, Get Published, Pitching, Platform, The Publishing Life, The Writing Life, Writing Craft

Hooks and Gimmicks

By Bob Hostetleron August 7, 2024
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Someone recently asked me (as if I know stuff), “What’s the difference between a hook and a gimmick?” I had to think about it, an action to which I’m unaccustomed. But I’m pretty sure I gave a good answer. Sure, why not? But as I often do, I decided to ask my Steve Laube Agency colleagues for their perspective, and as always was delighted by their answers: Tamela Hancock Murray said, “A hook is a …

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Category: Book Proposals, Pitching

Know Your Genre When Making a Pitch

By Steve Laubeon August 5, 2024
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Awhile ago I received a call that illustrates a common error a writer can make when making their pitch: the problem of not knowing the genre in which they are writing. The call went something like this: Writer: I’m calling to see if your agency handles westerns. Agent: That is a tough genre to sell in the current market, but a lot would depend on how well you can write it. Writer: Some …

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