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The Art of the Sentence

By Bob Hostetleron July 11, 2018
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A month or so ago I asked some social media friends what sentence from a book rocked their world. The replies were delightful, and I shared some of them in my June 27 post on this site, titled “In Praise of Memorable Sentences.” There were too many, however, to include them all at that time, so I offer the rest below, with  the author, title, and (in parentheses) the friend who answered my question:

“This is what they do for us, both books and friends: they remind us what it is to be human.” Barbara Hambly, Homeland (Kim Hampton).

“Then she noticed that there was something crunching under her feet. The Lion, the Witch, and the Wardrobe, C. S. Lewis (Joshua J. Masters).

“There is no one like us when we are gone, but then there is no one like anyone else, ever.” Keep Moving, Dick Van Dyke (Judy Gyde).

“People will take a limitation from their external environment, internalize it, exaggerate it, and bolster it in their imaginations until they’ve shackled themselves.” Reality-Based Leadership, Cy Wakeman (Kass Fogle).

 “All we have to decide is what to do with the time that’s been given us.” The Fellowship of the Ring, J. R. R. Tolkein (Lisa Sucaciu Kibler).

“Stay gold, Ponyboy.” The Outsiders, S. E. Hinton (Cheryl Lynn Childers).

 “If I find in myself a desire which no experience in this world can satisfy, the most probable explanation is that I was made for another world.” Mere Christianity, C. S. Lewis (Annette Marie Griffin).

“But detours, roundabouts, and imperfections, as the incarnation͛s setting straight of our sidetracked humanity makes clear, are the paths used by the Spirit to take us home.” Nudge, Len Sweet (Chip Kelly).

“There is no cure for being who you truly are.” The Mermaid’s Sister, Carrie Anne Noble (Kristen Stieffel).

“You never really understand a person until you consider things from his point of view…until you climb in his skin and walk around in it.” To Kill a Mockingbird, Harper Lee (Melissa Sivels).

“Perhaps when you are old and are one day counting up your assets, you may be awed to come across twelve baskets of bread and fish among your family treasures.” Parents in Pain, John White (Dianne Barker).

“How old is the child driving your emotional car, and is he or she old enough to have a license?” The Missing Commandment: Love Yourself, Jerry and Denise Basel (David Sanford).

“Jesus didn’t see a human interruption; He saw a divine appointment.” Wild Goose Chase, Mark Batterson (Cathy Baker).

“No one helps the poor like the poor.” City of Joy, Dominique Lapierre (Elaine Joyce Rader).

“We need to be crushed in order for our fruit to make wine for the needs of others.” The Christian Home: A Woman’s View, Shirley Rice (Callie Law Daruk).

“You got to know where your towel is.” The Hitchhiker’s Guide to the Galaxy, Douglas Adams (Nigel Horridge).

These bits of paper [telegrams] which could fall from stunned hands and blow about in the knife-sharp wind, which told you that the boy you’d suckled, bathed, scolded and cried over, was—well—wasn’t.” The Light Between Oceans, M. L. Stedman (Nancy Lohr).

“The trunks of the trees too were dusty and the leaves fell early that year and we saw the troops marching along the road and the dust rising and leaves, stirred by the breeze, falling and the soldiers marching and afterward the road bare and white except for the leaves.” A Farewell to Arms, Ernest Hemingway (Lawrence W. Wilson).

“Wisdom is the power to see, and the inclination to choose, the best and highest goal, together with the surest means of attaining it.” Knowing God, J. I. Packer (Michelle Mann Adserias).

“When we walk, praying for guidance, to the edge of all the light we have and breathlessly take that first step into the foggy mystery of the unknown, we must believe that one of two things will happen: either God will provide us with something rock-solid to land on and stand on, or he will teach us how to fly.” The Crime of Living Cautiously, Luci Shaw (Joyce Ellis).

“I was on fire.” The Glass Castle, Jeannette Walls (Linda Clare).

It’s amazing, isn’t it, the power that a single sentence can hold? It is also a valuable lesson for writers (of both fiction and nonfiction)—not just to write sentences, but to craft them.

What about you? Do you have a favorite sentence to add to the list?

 

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Category: Craft, Writing CraftTag: Craft, Sentences, Writing Craft

In Praise of Memorable Sentences

By Bob Hostetleron June 27, 2018
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In her book, The Writing Life, Annie Dillard tells the story of a well-known writer who was collared by a university student, who asked, “Do you think I could be a writer?” “Well,” the writer said, “I don’t know…. Do you like sentences?” Dillard continues: The writer could see the student’s amazement. Sentences? Do I like sentences? I am twenty years old and do I like sentences? If he had liked …

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Category: Language, Reading, The Writing Life, Writing CraftTag: Language, Reading, Writing Craft

Test Your Writing Out Loud

By Dan Balowon June 26, 2018
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Once you write something, try reading it out loud. It might change the way you write. I worked with audiobooks for a number of years and few things were more interesting than how something sounded when read aloud by the audiobook performer, whether it was the author or a professional voice talent. There were times, when an author read their own material for the recording, they actually stopped …

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Category: Craft, Writing CraftTag: audio, Reading, Writing Craft

Wronged in Business? When You Want to Hold a Grudge

By Tamela Hancock Murrayon June 21, 2018
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Even though we’re doing business in the Christian community, none of us is immune from feeling wronged at one time or another. Perhaps an editor should have bought your book instead of someone else’s. Maybe you know a publisher didn’t promote your book with sufficient enthusiasm. Someone who doesn’t understand you could be making negative comments about you.  Or someone could (intentionally or …

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Category: Book Business, Communication, The Writing LifeTag: Career, Grudge, The Writing Life

What Does Your Reader Need?

By Bob Hostetleron June 13, 2018
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I attend many writers’ conferences, as an author, speaker, and agent. As a result, I meet and become friends with many fine people and outstanding writers. At a recent gathering, I enjoyed a spirited and stimulating conversation with an aspiring author who has a passion for reaching readers with the good news of Jesus Christ. I identify with that. But I’m not sure we ever got onto the same page, …

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Category: Book Proposals, Conferences, Pitch, Pitching, The Writing LifeTag: Audience, book proposals, pitch, Pitching, readers

I Feel This Post May Hurt Your Thinkings

By Bob Hostetleron June 6, 2018
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Everyone has pet peeves. I have a menagerie of them. One of my favorites is the common (and fairly recent) tendency of English speakers and writers to confuse and conflate the words, “feel” and “think.” But feelings are not thoughts and thoughts are not feelings. That might seem obvious and elementary, but it drives me nuts how often people miss or ignore the distinction. Consider headlines and …

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Category: Craft, Creativity, Language, Writing CraftTag: Language, Vocabulary, Writing Craft

Book Reading in a Social Media World

By Dan Balowon June 5, 2018
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At some point every writer confronts the trend of readers who would rather consume 140 characters in social media than 140 pages of words. Social media and smart phones change everything in our world and their impact on book reading and writing is substantial. At the same time social media and smart phones have made people closer and more accessible than ever before, they also allow others to …

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Category: Craft, Creativity, Writing CraftTag: Creativity, Media, Writing Craft

Five Ways Getting an Agent is Like Dating

By Bob Hostetleron May 30, 2018
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At a recent writers’ conference, I enjoyed my first “speed dating” experience. Maybe I should clarify. “Yes, you should,” says my wife. These were “speed dating for writers” sessions, in which writers sat down for rapid-fire five-minute appointments with editors, agents, and authors (many conferences provide writers with the opportunity to sign up for fifteen-minute appointments, which pass …

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Category: Agents, Conferences, Get Published, PitchingTag: Agents, Get Published, Pitching

A Title Wave

By Bob Hostetleron May 23, 2018
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Some writers find it hard to title their work; others have as much (or more) fun creating titles as they do writing articles, stories, or books. So, just for fun, I asked some of my colleagues and clients: “What title of a nonexistent, imaginary, unwritten, or unpublished work do you love? Or would you love to read if it were available?” For example, some of my “dream” titles are: No Grit, No …

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Category: Book Proposals, Creativity, PitchTag: Book Titles, Creativity

Why I Read to the End

By Tamela Hancock Murrayon May 17, 2018
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I am the world’s worst about abandoning novels I read for leisure. I’ll give a book a fair chance, but as soon as I find I don’t like it, I have no compunction about tossing it aside to pursue a different story. And believe me, as a literary agent, I have many books to consider. In any room we spend time in at home, several books stay within reach. Authors must earn my time and effort. So how does …

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Category: Reading, Writing CraftTag: Reading, The Writing Life, Writing Craft
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