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Empathy Maps: How to Discover Your Reader

By Megan Brownon September 28, 2023
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There are a handful of questions I ask aspiring writers to answer to determine if they have a good grasp on their concept or if their proposal could be a viable option for publishing. The first question is this: “Who are you serving?”

Many times, the look I receive in response is wide-eyed and uncertain. If an aspiring author isn’t keenly aware of their reader–who they are, what they are like, or what they need–it is a clear indicator that the person I’m speaking with isn’t quite ready to pitch. Knowing your reader is arguably one of the most essential aspects of the writing process.  To speak directly to the needs of the reader, an author should have a deep and abiding understanding of their life stages, challenges, unique struggles, and desired outcome or felt need.

How does a writer uncover these facts?

There is a tool I use every time I prepare to begin a project, big or small. I build an empathy map. An empathy map is simply a tool to help you sift and sort through your thoughts and understanding of a particular segment of your readers. And it is important to note that any given project can have more than one reader avatar. So, this tool can be used for all types of readers and will give deeper insight into the wants and needs of your audience.

Begin with a blank sheet of paper, and draw a circle in the center. In the middle of the circle, write down everything you know about your reader. For example, when I wrote my last book, I had three primary readers in mind; I named them Chloe, Jen, and Erin. I named my secondary reader Suzy Church Lady. I completed an empathy map for each persona. In the center of Chloe’s circle, I wrote down the important details about her life. She is young and newly married. She just had her first child, longs for connection, struggles with loneliness, and is desperately anxious. Take a moment to jot down all of the important details about your reader in the middle of the page.

Divide the rest of the paper into four quadrants by drawing a vertical line through the center of the page and another line horizontally through the middle. Label the quadrants the following categories: Thinks, Feels, Does, Wants/Needs.

This is where the fun begins. As you walk through the process of writing the thoughts, feelings, and actions of your target reader, you can really get into their head and shape your content to meet their needs. Let’s go back to our friend Chloe. Under the Thinks column, I would write, “This is not the life I wanted.” Or “Why is making friends so hard?” In the Feels section, I would make note of her feelings in isolation, her disappointment, and her longing for connection. In the Does category, I detail her inability to connect in person and her daily habit of doom-scrolling for friends on social media. Simultaneously, in the Wants/Needs section of the map, I organize the list of things she wants and needs. She wants friends. She wants answers. She needs instruction and encouragement.

How does a writer use these facts?

Do you see how this can help you grasp your readers’ felt needs and why they would want to purchase a book on your topic? If you can understand your readers’ wants and needs through empathy mapping, you can build and tailor your content to meet them in their struggle. Your words can be a well-thought-out lifeline to them and offer them the things they need to accomplish their goals or aims. Empathy mapping can be a handy tool to dive deeper and create content that truly speaks to those you hope to reach.

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Finding an Audience

By Dan Balowon September 27, 2023
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Christian authors can find it challenging to determine an audience for their books, mainly because Christian books are aimed at something different than age ranges. Christian books are often aimed at a “psychographic,” rather than a demographic. This means Christian books are often aimed at readers who have certain values, beliefs, and lifestyles, rather than an age range of males or females. No …

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Write from Scars

By Bob Hostetleron September 21, 2023
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I learned recently that my agent—the man, the myth, the legend, Steve Laube—speaking at a writers conference, quoted something I’d said in a recent conference keynote. Yes, you read that right! The Great One actually quoted me! Me! And it wasn’t the usual “Can you believe anyone is that stupid?” sort of allusion. It was in a favorable context, as though I’d said something of value. Well, slap my …

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Category: Pitching, The Writing Life, Theology, Writing Craft

Maximizing Your 15-Minute Conference Appointment

By Megan Brownon August 3, 2023
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Psyching myself up to sit across from an acquisitions editor to pitch my proposal for the first time gave me heart palpitations. My Fitbit thought I was working out the whole time. I can giggle now; but at the beginning, I can remember how much my own nervousness completely consumed me. Why are these appointments so nerve-wracking? Perhaps, the possibility of failure starts the chain reaction of …

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Agent Etiquette

By Tamela Hancock Murrayon July 27, 2023
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Agent Etiquette: Ima Writer Interviews Literary Agent Empress Worthington In the interest of helping new authors learn the etiquette of approaching literary agents, the following is a conversation with aspiring author Ima Writer and literary agent Empress Worthington. Ima: I have an extraordinary manuscript, and I want an agent. Empress: Congratulations on completing your book! Do you have a …

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How Does This Connect to the Gospel?

By Megan Brownon July 6, 2023
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Since we are in the midst of writers conference season, I continue to prepare myself for the hustle of back-to-back, 15-minute appointments with new authors who are overcome with excitement and passion for a particular topic. All the “p” words–from passion to purpose–consume the conversation. The first question I’m going to ask is this: “How does this connect to the gospel?” No matter …

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Who Decides to Publish Your Book?

By Steve Laubeon May 1, 2023
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The editor you met with at a writers conference liked your proposal and asked you to send it to her after the conference. She was already talking about format and promotional ideas. Or you submitted a proposal and received an enthusiastic response from the acquisitions editor. Four (or maybe six to eight) months later, a rejection letter showed up in your inbox. What happened? No matter how much …

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Category: Agents, Book Proposals, Career, Get Published, Pitching, The Publishing Life, The Writing LifeTag: book proposals, Get Published, Publishing Decision

What I’m Looking For – Megan Brown

By Megan Brownon April 25, 2023
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[Megan is currently on sabbatical and is not accepting new proposals or taking new clients. Please contact another agent in our company.] As a reader who became a writer, I can certainly say God has sparked a flame in my heart for the written word, specifically His Word. In learning to study the Bible, line by line and verse by verse, I felt completely consumed with wanting to know more. Seventeen …

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Why Did She Say That?

By Tamela Hancock Murrayon April 13, 2023
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Because this blog’s primary purpose is to help authors by dispensing opinions and advice, posts may hit close to home. A long time ago, I read an article in which a blogger I’d recently interacted with made a snarky remark. I thought, Is the blogger talking about me? So I know that sinking, disturbing feeling of wondering if I’ve been surreptitiously called out in public. I’m glad I saw the post …

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Tips for Nonfiction

By Tamela Hancock Murrayon February 22, 2023
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In response to my post “Line Editing,” a faithful blog reader asked me if I had any tips for nonfiction writers. The suggestions here aren’t considered line editing but are more general. I hope they offer insight. Consider your brand. While you want each book to be fresh, you want to stay within your brand, or the brand you’re building, so your readership knows you wrote …

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Category: Branding, Pitch, Pitching, The Writing Life, Writing Craft
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