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Pitching

Start with Your Winning Argument

By Tamela Hancock Murrayon September 23, 2021
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A few years ago, I received a call from someone who otherwise never contacts me. “You need to pay expenses for Dick and Jane. They’ve done so much for us!”

Dick and Jane had done a lot for the caller, but they had done nothing for anyone I love. While I’m not so coldhearted as to hang up the phone based on this flawed opening, the caller had opened with an unconvincing pitch.

Writers can make the same mistake when contacting agents.

Not So Impressive

“My book needs editing, but I’d like representation.”

“I’ve never written a book before, and I haven’t finished it yet; but I’d like representation.”

“I’m not qualified to write this book, but I’d like representation.”

“I don’t have any platform, but I’d like representation.”

“Since you’ve been successful with academic theology books, particularly those discussing viewpoints popular in the 1200s, my work is right for you.”

Be Honest!

Of course, you want to be honest in your pitch. But don’t open with the reason the agent may need to reject the book.

What to Do

“My book needs editing, but I’d like representation.”

You’re not ready to query. Would you please edit or have your book edited, then contact agents? CWI has many resources to help you find a freelance editor.

“I’ve never written a book before, and I haven’t finished this yet; but I’d like representation.”

I sign debut authors all the time. However, I recommend completing the book before submitting a query.

Why? Because as you can imagine, writing a book is hard work. I recommend taking time for the discovery process before proceeding.

  • Do you enjoy or feel driven to spend months writing a book eight or twelve hours a day?
  • Are you motivated to compose a manuscript around a packed schedule that may include a day job and many other responsibilities?
  • Are you willing to give up another hobby or commitment you enjoy to spend that time writing?

You need to answer these questions before you try to engage an agent. You are the only person who can answer them.

“I’m not qualified to write this book, but I’d like representation.”

Become qualified, or cowrite with someone who is.

Why? Look at it this way: As a consumer, will you read a book on brain surgery written by a heart surgeon? Or would you prefer to read a book on heart surgery written by a heart surgeon?

“I don’t have any platform, but I’d like representation.”

Take the time to build your platform before approaching an agent.

“Since you’ve been successful with academic theology books, particularly those discussing viewpoints popular in the 1200s, my work is right for you.”

These authors may base this assumption on the success other agents within our agency have enjoyed when naming a topic not in my wheelhouse. That’s not to say I will never represent a new category, but I may be reluctant to pursue a book outside of my core enthusiasms.

Solution? Once you have chosen an agency to query, investigate the agents to ensure you are querying the agent who’s passionate about your type of book.

Impressive!

Authors can’t change some factors no matter what. For instance, a debut author is a debut author until published. An author can certainly open with, “Thank you for considering my first book, Jack in the Box.” Then immediately highlight the strengths of the book, be it fiction or nonfiction. If the agent says, “I absolutely MUST read this book,” then you’ve made progress. After all, you wrote the book for a reason. You haven’t invested time and energy in a book you didn’t feel is entertaining, desperately needed, or both. When you convince the agent the book is essential today and editors can and will seriously consider the submission, you are well on your way to representation.

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Should I Personalize My Query?

By Bob Hostetleron September 1, 2021
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I’m frequently surprised by the things other industry professionals say. That could mean I’m still (and always) learning. Or it could be an indication that such people are much smarter than I am. Nah, that can’t be it. I was recently a tad nonplussed to see a fellow literary agent state that the personalization of a query or cover letter or email was a waste of a writer’s time. I must …

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It’s New to Them

By Tamela Hancock Murrayon August 4, 2021
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The other day, I was surprised to see an ad for a book published fairly recently regarding Kitty Genovese, a woman murdered as bystanders watched in Queens, New York, in 1964. This case was so notorious for its study of human behavior (Why would witnesses fail to act?) that people have analyzed the event for decades. Most adults know the name and reference without blinking. But what about younger …

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Should I Time My Novel’s Release to a Past Event?

By Tamela Hancock Murrayon July 1, 2021
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Novelists often ask me about timing their stories to the anniversary of a significant historical event. As with most questions, no definitive right or wrong answer exists. Here are a few thoughts. Does the event capture the public’s imagination? Since most Americans make yearly plans for the July 4th holiday, that event can offer perennial plots for novelists. But to time a novel to celebrate the …

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The Back Cover Blurb

By Tamela Hancock Murrayon June 23, 2021
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Even in the age of online shopping, the back cover blurb is essential in helping a customer choose a book. When a reader decides between two books, the one with the best back cover copy often wins. When referring to the back cover, the reader wants to know the following: What does this book reveal? Why should I care? Nonfiction Of course, nonfiction covers a wide swath, including instructional, …

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How Long Should My Summary Be for a Novel?

By Tamela Hancock Murrayon June 10, 2021
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Writers often ask about the length of a book summary for a proposal. How long should it be? I can say: The summary should be as long as you need it to be. Your goal is to present your story so an editor will want to read the book and then make an offer to publish it. If you can write a compelling summary, that’s a gift you should not be shy to use. Here are a few more tips: Present your proposal …

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A Literary Agent’s Wish List

By Bob Hostetleron May 27, 2021
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People often ask me, “What are you looking for?” It’s a natural question to ask a literary agent, even when the questioner knows that the agent has offered a detailed answer on the agency website (here, for example). After all, something could’ve changed. I may, since updating my interests, have suddenly decided to get bold, branch out, and try to sell a systematic theology in iambic pentameter. …

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Spoiler Alert!

By Tamela Hancock Murrayon May 12, 2021
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Sometimes authors submit proposals that don’t reveal the ending of a novel. I’m the first to admit that a teaser will encourage a reader to buy a book. Once the reader has to know how the story ends, they’re hooked! Yes, agents are readers. However, when evaluating a novel for representation, we are marketers. Agents must consider if editors will be interested in the book. In turn, editors must …

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Why Is the Book Proposal So Important?

By Steve Laubeon April 12, 2021
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This question has been raised many times: “Why do I have to jump through your hoops to create a proposal only to have it rejected with a form letter?” It’s a Job Application Your proposal is, in essence, an application to have a business (corporate or sole proprietor) to pay you to publish your book, to spend their money on your work in a effort to create a profitable product. …

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A Common Platform Mistake

By Bob Hostetleron April 7, 2021
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Some time ago I received a submission that went something like this (names and details have been changed to protect the innocent, guilty, and all those in between): I’ve published three successful nonfiction books. All three, in the area of business and leadership, are still selling very well. One of them, coauthored with Bill Gates (with a foreword by Warren Buffett), reached bestseller status …

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