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Nuance: A Key to Real-Life Characters

By Karen Ballon June 24, 2015
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I love watching movies and TV. Love being transported by the stories and entertained by the characters. Lately, I’ve been keying in on something, though, that is helping me with building characters in my fiction.

Nuance.

It’s defined by good ol’ Webster’s as “a subtle or small distinction,” but I’m finding that it could be defined as “the difference between real-life and stereotypical characters.” It’s the subtle ways we show who are characters are. The little hints we plant that let the true heart peek through. The barest hint of something lurking in a smile…the slight twitch at the corner of the eye…the tremor in the hands…a stiffening of the back…

Little actions with huge impact.

One of the biggest mistakes writers make is crafting characters that are stereotypical, clichéd, or over-the-top. Especially villains. But few people in real life are that black and white. We need to create characters who live and breath—and who aren’t quite so clear-cut in their words and actions. Let’s use some nuance in our writing.

So how do we find these nuanced elements to breathe life into our characters? I’m discovering them in the actors who bring TV shows and movies to life. I realized this while watching a scene of one of my favorite shows: Law & Order. It was in an episode called “Fluency,” and features prosecutor Jack McCoy. He was questioning a man who manufactured a bogus flu vaccine, then sold it to those who would sell it to doctors. As a result, people who thought themselves protected, weren’t. And sixteen of those people died. This is one of my favorite scenes because McCoy uses a great movie, The Third Man, to make a powerful point. But this time, when I watched the scene, I started asking myself why I like McCoy’s character so much. And what I like—and don’t like–about his mannerisms. For example, his voice gets too strident for me when he lets things get to him during a trial. But in this scene, the way the memory of the movie hits him, and the way he relates it to the accused…it is, for me, perfect. His expressions, the movements of his hands, his tone of voice…all nuanced in such a way as to show McCoy, realizing as he talks, how perfect the parallels are between the movie and what this man has done. And the man’s reaction? That, too, was perfect.

Which led me to thinking about other nuanced actors:

Movies:

Ben Stiller in The Secret Life of Walter Mitty.

Jim Carry in The Majestic

Robin Williams—have you seen him in a serious role? Amazing.

(just a side note: I found it interesting how some of our funniest, and over-the-top actors can also be the most powerfully nuanced.)

Haley Joel Osmet in The Sixth Sense

Mel Gibson in Signs

Kevin Spacey in…well, most any role he’s played.

TV Shows:

Robert Taylor in Longmire

Thomas Gibson in Criminal Minds

Tim Roth in Lie to Me

Ernie Pantusso in Cheers

Summer Glau in Firefly (and the movie, Serenity)

I’m sure you have lists of your own. So I encourage you to watch them again. And this time, when you do so, let them help you gain a better understanding of nuanced actions, words, tone of voice, body language…all those things we use to put the flesh on our characters’ bones. Ask yourself what you like—or don’t like—about the characters. And study the performances. Then put what you see and hear and learn to use.

Your characters—and your readers—will thank you.

Oh, and if you’d like to see it, the Law & Order scene is here. Have fun!

 

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Category: Craft, Writing CraftTag: Characters, Craft, Writing Craft

The Accidental Theologian

By Dan Balowon June 23, 2015
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I’m stepping far outside my theological pay grade today so you will need to test and weigh the words of this post. After forty years of knowing Jesus, I find myself challenging my assumptions about many things on a regular basis, attempting to see myself as God sees me. What attitudes do I have that should change? What comfortable positions do I have that are more self-deception than God’s truth? …

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Category: Creativity, Theology, Writing Craft

Why We Must Be Forthright

By Tamela Hancock Murrayon June 18, 2015
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 I’ve heard more than one writer say, “I’m sneaking Christianity into a book for the general market!” Wanting to reach the unsaved is a wonderful mission, but in my opinion, sneaking (and I’m not kidding when I say authors actually use this verb) Christianity into books isn’t the way to do it. Why not? Well, for one, that’s not the example Christ set. …

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Category: Branding, Craft, Creativity, Marketing, Trends, Writing CraftTag: Christian, Craft, Writing Craft

Eyes Open, Antennae Up

By Dan Balowon June 16, 2015
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I can find humor anywhere. It’s a gift…or a curse. I waver on that regularly. About 35 years ago I was in a small grocery store across from our apartment to pick up a few things we needed. We didn’t have much storage space so we went to the store multiple times each week for few things each time, usually diapers and baby formula. To this day, I can still see the well-dressed middle age woman in …

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Category: Craft, CreativityTag: Creativity, Humor, Writing Craft

What’s in a Name?

By Tamela Hancock Murrayon June 11, 2015
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Look at this list of names: Mary Maxwell Julius Cromwell Hector Williams Lucinda Smith Do they mean anything to you? Probably not, unless you happen to have some random connection to them such as you happen to have an aunt named Lucinda. Truth is, they don’t mean anything to me, either. I just made them up. (With apologies to the many people named Mary Maxwell, et al on Facebook.) But what …

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Category: Craft, Creativity, Writing CraftTag: Character Names, Craft, Writing Craft

Starting Your Own Writer’s Conference

By Dan Balowon June 9, 2015
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No, you don’t need to start your own writer’s conference, but the headline sounded attention-grabbing to me. Every writer needs to intentionally put themselves in a position to learn and be challenged in a variety of areas. The formal environment for that is the professional writer’s conference. Click here for a list, but you need something more consistent and ongoing as well. Not everyone lives …

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Category: Conferences, The Writing LifeTag: Challenge Group, The Writing Life, writers conferences

When Your Book Becomes Personal

By Steve Laubeon June 8, 2015
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I wish every writer could see what we see as agents and editors with regard to proposals. I wish they could experience the sheer variety of book ideas presented at writers conferences and through the submission process. It is breathtaking. And sometimes heartbreaking. I wrote down a selection of the true stories that have recently crossed my desk. This small sampling shows real-life events that …

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Category: Book Business, Book Proposals, Conferences, Get PublishedTag: Get Published, Personal Stories

Colorado Conference Report

By Tamela Hancock Murrayon May 28, 2015
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This past week, for the first time, I attended the The Write His Answer Christian Writers Conference Conference, in Colorado, where I was honored to be on faculty. Marlene Bagnull, conference director, is a wonderful woman with a heart for God who really cares about writers. Her staff was always cheerful and helpful. The conference as a whole reflected her spirit and was, as a result, a joyous …

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Wordsmith Tools

By Karen Ballon May 27, 2015
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Thanks so much for all the great comments last week. I had such fun reading your thoughts and your must-edit words. It’s always so comforting to know we’re not alone in our struggles, isn’t it? So, now that we’ve confessed together, let’s take a look at some tools that can not only help you in the area of unique and effective word choices, but can actually increase your ability to portray …

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The Great Slot Mystery

By Dan Balowon May 26, 2015
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Every traditional publishing company has a personality or focus that defines them and their product. Usually that personality or focus is determined by past success. They also know how many books they can effectively publish during a year. Combining focus and capacity, you have the beginnings of a publishing strategy. No publisher (or for that matter any company) will succeed for long unless they …

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Category: Book Business, The Publishing LifeTag: Categories, publishing, The Publishing Life
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