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Proposals: Comparing Your Writing to Icons

By Karen Ballon September 2, 2015
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Awhile ago, I was reviewing a proverbial stack of nonfiction and fiction proposals. As I read them, I noticed something. And I saw that something again just recently as I read over proposals during a series of 15-minute meetings with conferees at a writers’ conference. What was that something? In their proposals, more and more writers are comparing their work to icons in publishing. As in:

“My work contains overtones of Ernest Hemingway.”

“This book marries the power of To Kill a Mockingbird with the truth of Corrie Ten Boom.”

“My books are just like Ted Dekker’s, so my audience is the same as his.”

Now, all of that is well and good if, indeed, those assertions are true. But I’m sorry to say, it usually isn’t. It’s not that the proposals were terrible. Some were pretty good. But there really weren’t overtones of EH, nor was there a marriage, nor was the story contained in the sample chapters “just like” a Ted Dekker book.

I get it. Writers want to position their writing, genre, style in the agents’ or editors’ minds. That’s a good thing. But if you want to compare your work to someone else’s, don’t make that comparison yourself. Instead, utilize the gift of readers. Here are some simple steps to do that:

  1. Put together a group of advance readers who agree to read your manuscript and answer a few questions. Don’t use friends and family. Instead, find readers through your social media, the local library or schools/universities, writers’ groups. Folks who don’t know you personally but who love to read.
  2. When you send the manuscript to these folks, ask them to comment on whatever will help you best, be it pacing, character development, plot, word choice, dialogue…whatever. But include this as one of your questions:

Did the writing, the story, or the tone remind you of any of your favorite writers?

Or have them fill in the blanks, such as:

If you enjoy ___________’s books, you’ll like this book. (But do not give them any possible names of writers. This has to come from the readers, not from you.)

  1. If there seems to be a consensus among the readers, meaning several compare you to the same writer, then you can say in your proposal: “Advance readers have said my writing/story/tone/voice (whatever) reminds them of ___________.”

What do you do if no one makes a comparison? Then talk about why you wrote the book. Something like, “I wrote this book because I enjoy Ted Dekker’s novels and wanted to craft a story that would resonate with readers of the genre.”

Peace, friends.

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Category: Book Proposals, Get PublishedTag: book proposals, Comparisons

Duh Blog

By Dan Balowon September 1, 2015
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Kyle Idelman’s AHA: The God Moment That Changes Everything (David C. Cook, 2014) is my inspiration today. If ever I write a book, it will be DUH: The Things That Never Change (Big Publisher, 20??) Today, I will reveal those things that are absolute truth that everyone should know. If you don’t, I have no advice for you. DUH would not be a self-help book because it doesn’t suggest a solution to any …

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Category: HumorTag: Humor

Fun Fridays – August 28, 2015

By Steve Laubeon August 28, 2015
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Sing along! And don’t hate me for putting this tune in your head today…

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Why Do You Read?

By Tamela Hancock Murrayon August 27, 2015
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In keeping with last week’s blog on personal reading, I’m thinking about how, over the years, my reasons for reading a book have changed. When I was a teenager, I would read a book to find out what might happen if I married: 1.) a rich man 2.) a poor man 3.) an executive 4.) an artist 5.) a pirate (not really but it’s hard to avoid them in books, though they’re scarce in …

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Patience Please

By Dan Balowon August 25, 2015
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This could be Part Two to last week’s post, but I didn’t intend it that way. It just happened. Have you noticed how many things in our lives are overly dramatic? A generation or two ago when “news” was delivered a half-hour here and there and TV, radio and newspapers dominated, dramatic stories were covered and some of them were “manufactured” stories for ratings or circulation purposes. But in …

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Category: Book Business, Career, Platform, The Publishing Life, TrendsTag: Drama, Patience, The Publishing Life

Book Sales Continue to Rise

By Steve Laubeon August 24, 2015
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Despite the rumors concerning of the demise of Christian books, bookstores, and especially Christian fiction  there is news that tells a different story. There were a couple statistics released this past week that show signs of encouragement! General market sales: According to the U.S. Census Bureau. Bookstore sales hit $698 million in the month of June 2015 compared to $672 million last June. …

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Category: Book Business, Book Sales, Career, Economics, TrendsTag: Book Sales

A Novel Idea

By Tamela Hancock Murrayon August 20, 2015
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As followers of this blog know, I have just returned from a wonderful conference in Oregon. Many of the questions and my interactions there caused me to re-evaluate my way of approaching how and what I read during my personal time. Please note: I am in no way changing my philosophy regarding what I represent as an agent. I’m still focusing on all forms of Christian romance and representing …

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Category: Craft, Get Published, ReadingTag: Ideas, Reading Craft

Doing Dialect Well

By Karen Ballon August 19, 2015
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“Aym t’inkin’ ye tol’ me, didna ya, dat dere be tips ‘n’ tricks ta doin’ de dialect da wey ye shud in buks?” Just in case you haven’t figured it out, here’s the translation of this bit of brutal brogue: “I’m thinking you told me, didn’t you, that there are tips and tricks to doing dialect the way you should in books?” There are, indeed. And the first line of this blog is the perfect example of …

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Category: Craft, Writing CraftTag: Craft, dialect, Writing Craft

Are You Writing Out of Order?

By Dan Balowon August 18, 2015
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Generally speaking, if you want to write a book, sitting down at a computer, opening a Word document and starting to write it is not the first thing you should do. Certainly, every writer should write and keep writing. In the same vein, every runner should run, every person interested in being a chef should prepare food and so on. But writing a book is not the first thing you should do if you …

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Category: Book Proposals, Career, Get Published, Platform, Writing CraftTag: Craft, Get Published, Platform

Family Christian Stores Survive Bankruptcy

By Steve Laubeon August 17, 2015
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In case you missed the news, last Tuesday the court approved the sale of the Family Christian Stores (FCS) to FCS Acquisitions. The new owner is basically the previous owner since Richard Jackson was part of that company too (which I have written about before-click to read). This sale, in essence, wipes clean over $120 million in debt that the stores owed. Their $75 million in assets will be …

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Category: Book Business, Legal IssuesTag: bankruptcy, Book Business, family christian stores, Legal
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